Proszę o sprawdzenie

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Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

World resources are disappearing because of people needs. In the near future some of the most significant resources can stop exist. New statistics show that some resources are wasted by human beings in a short amount of time. In my view people have to be aware of forests called lungs of the earth.

Firstly, every tree produces the crucial component of live known as oxygen. The problem of cutting down trees is that every removing tree wasting a small amount of oxygen. The earth without trees is the earth without live. Forests for the earth are like lungs for human. Without working lungs, person will suffocate and die. It is the same situation with forests. If people do not think about tree, everything will start extinct. Trees have special processes when sun energy is changed to oxygen. So people should be conscious of cutting down trees.

Secondly, animals in a disappearing forest will lose their home and start to survive in human settlements because of will of survive. It is a true that animals often disturb people but their settlements becoming bigger and bigger and forests start to dying because human beings want a more place. It is difficult to live when dangerous animals like bears, tigers and hogs can attract a big amount of people. Next problem is people either start disturb animals in their natural behavior by feeding them. Feeding animals can damage their independence. For example, feeding predators won’t kill other animals because this predator knows that human will help them. Those animals begin to be lazy and can get obesity which can limit their moves.

Disappearing forests pose an overwhelming problem of the modern world. People see this problem with bare eye and try to avoid cutting down trees. However trees as a crucial component are used to human needs like paper, money. Maybe it will a better way to make a paper from other components.
World resources are disappearing because of 'people' (nie, tutaj musi byc 'people'S) needs. In the near future some of the most significant resources 'can' WILL stop 'exist' (zle slowo).
Firstly, every tree produces the crucial component of 'live' (tutaj musi byc rzeczownik a nie czasownik) known as oxygen. The problem of cutting down trees is that 'every removing tree wasting' (cos tu nie tak) a small amount of oxygen. The earth without trees is 'the' (zly przedimek) earth without 'live' (popraw). Forests for the earth are like lungs for (przedimek) human. Without working lungs, (przedimek) person will suffocate and die. It is the same situation with (przedimek) forests. If people do not think about (przedimek) tree, everything will 'start' (tu masz zle slowo, o czym myslisz to 'become') extinct. Trees have special processes when 'sun' (nie, tutaj sun's) energy is changed to oxygen.

Secondly, animals in a disappearing forest will lose their home and start to survive in human settlements because of (przedimek) will 'of' (zle slowo, tutaj TO) survive. It is 'a' (niepotr) true that animals often disturb people (przecinek przed 'but') but their settlements becoming bigger and bigger and forests start to 'dying' (die) because human beings want 'a' (niepotr) 'more' (zle slowo) place. It is difficult to live when dangerous animals like bears, tigers and hogs can attract a 'big' (zle slowo) amount of people. (przedimek) next problem is THAT people 'either' (nie rozumiem dlaczego dales slowo 'either' jak dajesz tylko jeden przyklad) start disturbING animals in their natural behavior by feeding them.
For example, feeding predators won’t kill other animals because this predator knows that (przedimek) human will help them. Those animals begin to be lazy and can get obesity which can limit their 'moves' (nie, slowo to jest 'movement').

However (przecinek) trees as a crucial component are used 'to' (zle slowo, tutaj 'for') human needs like paper OR money. Maybe it will a better way to make 'a' (niepotr) paper from other components.
nie wiem dlaczego ale ciągle mam problem z przedimkami. Szukam w tekście gdzie mam go wstawić ale wciąż źle to robię. Powtarzam je i powtarzam i dalej te same błędy. Nie wiem co z tym zrobić :(
Cytat: barro93
nie wiem dlaczego ale ciągle mam problem z przedimkami. Szukam w tekście gdzie mam go wstawić ale wciąż źle to robię. Powtarzam je i powtarzam i dalej te same błędy. Nie wiem co z tym zrobić :(

Najpierw poszukaj wszystkie zrodla (tzn. ksiazki, google, podreczniki, wszystko co istnieje) gdzie przedimki sa wytlumaczone 'recznie'. Moze z jednych z nich cos Ci wpadnie.
Jak nie, to przygotuj sie na trudna sprawe. Idz do kosciola, padaj na kolana i pros Boga zeby Ci to w jakis sposob wbil do glowy. Niema innej drogi.

Mozesz zawsze pisac tutaj i my bedziemy Ci wskazywac dobra droge. :-)

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