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I want to be doctor.This is my dream job, but my parents do not see me in this proffesion. They say that i am very sensitive man. Doctor can help other people and learn secrets of human bodies. It is interesting. I'm blissful when other people are also so i think i can handle this job. Moreover it's a very sociable job as you meet many new people.


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I want to be PRZEDIMEK doctor.This is my dream job, but my parents do not see me in this proffesion<-ORTOGR. They say that i<-ORTOGR am PRZEDIMEK very sensitive man. Doctor LICZBA MNOGA LUB PRZEDIMEK can help other people and learn secrets of human bodies. It is interesting. I'm blissful JAKI? when other people are also NIE ROZUMIEM so i think i can handle this job. Moreover it's a very sociable job as you meet many new people. ALE NIE WSZYSCY KONTAKTUJĄ