Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu o alkoholiźmie

Alcoholic disease, alcohol dependence syndrome, alcoholism - this equivalent to
concepts. They describe disturbance, which consist in loss control about quantity of taken/ consumed alcohol. It include symptoms: somatic, psychological and behavioral, and drinking alcohol is overriding among different behavior, so grounds this disease is psychical and physical addiction to alcohol substance. Untreated alcoholism can be tragic in effects. It take to breakdown of relation with family, friends, financial problems and often to conflict with law. It ruin addict's life and her nearest. Untreated person most often die of complications, which result from abuse alcohol.
Characteristic of alcohol syndrome are so-called three ways of drinking:
1. Everyday drink up helping alcohol for keep satisfactory function.
2. Regularly, although limited to drinking alcohol in weekend, but in large quantity.
3. Row drinking, which show alternatively with period sobriety.

We choose this problem, because alcoholic disease is rate to disease of civilization. It touch society on both hemisphere of world. For most people alcohol is supplement's entertainment and fun. It's commonly a thing to relax. It's accept drinking one or two drinks on every meetings, after hard workday and for relax. Terrifying is fact, that alcohol begin partake people more and more young. According to statistics in Europe every fourth person in age 15-64 regularly partake of too much alcohol and over 14 millions are dependent. In Poland according to Statystyka Państwowej Agencji Rozwiązywania Problemów Alkoholowych live about 8[tel]dependent people and next 3 million drink alcohol excessively. In Poland 10% population abuse to alcohol. In commutation it's about 4 millions people. Dependent's people estimate about 2,5% of population - about 1 million. Effects of overdose drinking alcohol are tragic - alcohol change functioning of brain. It weaken criticism and finally direct to take total control of all human's life.
Among young people main reason on increase susceptibility to addiction is social factor - facility access to alcohol, his price and also social group and environment of which come from.

Alcoholic disease, alcohol dependence syndrome, alcoholism - 'this equivalent to
concepts' (calkowicie tego nie rozumiem). They describe (brak przedimka) disturbance, which 'consist' (pomys, to 3os.l.poj) in loss (brak slowa) control about (brak 2 slowa) quantity 'of' (niepotr) taken/ consumed. 'alcohol' (niepotr). 'It' (nie rozumiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) 'include' (pomysl) symptoms (such as): somatic, psychological and behavioral, 'and drinking alcohol is overriding among different behavior, so grounds this disease is psychical and physical addiction to alcohol substance' (tego fragmentu calkowicie nie rozumiem, krecisz ale to nie jest jasne). Untreated alcoholism can 'be' (zle slowo) tragic 'in' (niepotr) effects. It 'take' (calkowicie zle slowo) to breakdown of 'relation' (pomysl, daj inny czasownik) with (przedimek) family, friends, financial problems and often to conflict with (przedimek) law. It (cos brak) ruin (przedimek) addict's life and 'her' (CO TO? tylko kobiety sa alcoholics? Jak ty to piszesz?) nearest. Untreated person most often 'die' (zle slowo) of complications, which result from (przedimek) abuse (brak slowa) alcohol.
Characteristic of alcohol syndrome are (przedimek) so-called three ways of drinking:
1. Everyday 'drink up helping alcohol' (nie rozumiem tego) for keep 'satisfactory' (co to ma znaczyc? Jaka jest 'unsatisfactory function?) function.
2. Regularly, although limited to drinking alcohol 'in' (zle slowo, tu brak 2 inne slowa) weekend, but in 'large' (co to znaczy 'large' 1 butelke wodki, 10 butelek wodki? - napisz to dokladniej) quantity.
3. 'Row' (nie rozumiem tego slowa tutaj) drinking, which 'show alternatively' (dlaczego nie napisalas 'altenates') with (przedimek) period (brak slowa) sobriety.

We 'choose' (zly czas) this problem, because alcoholic disease is 'rate to disease' (nie rozumime tego) of civilization. It 'touch' (no, powiedz mi, ze nie wiesz, ze 'it' to jest 3os.l.poj) society on both (przedimek) 'hemisphere' (both to znaczy 2- dlaczego masz l. poj?) of (przedimek) world. For most people alcohol is (przedimek) 'supplement's' (co napisalas to supplement is, czy to jest poprawnie?) entertainment and fun. It's commonly a thing (tu brakuje pare slow - napisz dokladniej)to relax.' It's accept' (co napisalas to ...It is accepot - czy to jest ok?) drinking one or two drinks 'on' (zle slowo) every 'meetings' (zle slowo), after (przedimek) hard workday and for 'relax' (daj inny rzeczownik). Terrifying is (przedimek) fact, that alcohol 'begin partake people' (nie rozumiem tego - zmien szyk zdania i bedzie latwiej) more and more young. According to statistics in Europe every fourth person in (przedimek) age 15-64 regularly 'partake' (pomys o tym person-3os.l.poj - chyba wiesz o czym mowa) of too much alcohol and over 14 'millions' (million) (ale czego? musisz napisac) are dependent (ale nad czym?). In Poland according to 'Statystyka Państwowej Agencji Rozwiązywania Problemów Alkoholowych' (nie rozumiem co to jest - tylko pisz w jez. ang- jak to nativa przeczta?) (cos brak) live about 8[tel]dependent people and (przedimek) 'next' (jakie next? tutaj 'further') 3 million drink alcohol excessively. In Poland 10% (cos brak) population abuse 'to' (niepotr) alcohol. In commutation it's about 4 'millions' (million) people. 'Dependent's people' (nie rozumiem tego) estimate about 2,5% of population - about 1 million. (przedimek) effects of 'overdose' (no to jest fajnie - nie znam za duzo ludzi, ktorzy moga 'overdose' - nie wiem ile mozna by wypis zeby 'overdose) 'drinking' (zle slowo) alcohol are tragic - alcohol 'change' (alcohol-3os.l.poj) (przedimek) functioning of (przedimek) brain. It 'weaken' ('it'- to jest 3os.l.poj) criticism and finally 'direct' (nie rozumiem tego slowa tutaj) to take total control of all (tu brak 2 slowa) human's life.
Among young people (przedimek) main reason 'on' (zle slowo, brak 2 inne slowa), increase susceptibility to addiction is (dalabym przedimek) social factor - 'facility access' (cos mi tu nie gra) to alcohol, 'his' Od kiedy 'alcohol' ma meskie korzenie?) price and also (przedimek) social group and environment 'of which come from.' (nie rozumiem do kogo to sie odnosi? do alcoholu?)

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