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I love reading books it makes me joy and happiness. When I read a book I forget about all my problems and thanks to this I can get relax. I also like watch the movie based on my favourite books. One of them is "Game of thrones". In my point of view this is the best movie in the world. Almost all scenes are identical, characters are played by professional actors, landscape looks like in the book. That sound like a really good movie, don't you think? Moreover you can watch this movie on the official website. It is a great thing for those who do not want to leave the house. Summarizing if you like science fiction you must see this movie or read this book ! I promise you that you will be impressed !!

I love reading books it 'makes' (nie 'robi' a daje' - masz zly czasownik) me joy and happiness.
I also like 'watch' (cont.) the movie based on my favourite books. One of them is THE "Game of thrones". Almost all (brak przedimka) scenes are identical, (przedimek) characters are played by professional actors, (przedimek) landscape looks like (tutaj brakuje pare slow, po polsku...jak ja sobie wyborazlem czytajac) in the book. That 'sound' (tutaj 3os.l.poj. that-it) like a really good movie, don't you think?
Summarizing (daj tutaj przecinek) if you like science fiction you must see this movie or read this book (!) (Nie krzycz! - to tylko sugestia, nie rozkaz) I promise you that you will be impressed (!!) (w ang. nie krzyczymy tak na ludzi, niepotr)

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I love reading books it gives me joy and happines. When I read a book I forget about all my problems and thanks to this I can get relax. I also like watching the movie based on my favourite books. One of them is the "Game of thrones". In my point of view this is the best movie in the world. Almost all the scenes are identical, the characters are played by professional actors, the Landscapes look the same as I imagined while reading a book. That sounds like a really good movie, don't you think? Moreover you can watch this movie on the official website. It is a great thing for those who do not want to leave the house. Summarizing ,if you like science fiction you must see this movie or read this book. I promise you that you will be impressed.

get relaxed
the movie - zmien to na movies