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The aim of this thesis was to develop a web application to manage courier company with additional support of a courier mobile terminal application for Android phones.
In developing of an application has been used a variety of technologies such as Spring Framework, Thymeleaf, Bootstrap, jQuery, Hibernate, Hibernate Validator, Google ZXing and tools such as integrated development environment Spring Tool Suite, Apache Maven and Apache Tomcat.
The application is divided into three main parts. The first part was the public space that contains the basic functionality available to customers applications such as login, register a new account, ordering shipping, shipment monitoring, history forwarding account and change account information panel. Another element of the application is part of the administrative, is available only to authorized users. It contains the party responsible for adding new couriers and management panel shipments, which is necessary for the proper functioning of the courier company. The last part of the application is REST API for operating the mobile terminal courier. It is responsible for synchronizing tasks courier web-based platform, and the transfer data of received and delivered shipments. The most important information of each delivered shipment is the signature of the recipient, which is transmitted from the mobile application and then stored in a database.
In application was used the latest technologies such as Spring Security and Spring OAuth2 ensure a high level of security against unauthorized access to the application.

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Napisz sam, wtedy byc moze ktos poprawi

Tak jak prosiłeś, w 100% tekst pisany przeze mnie (0 translatora) :


The goal of this thesis was develop a web application to manage a courier company with additional support of courier mobile terminal as Android phone application.
In developing application has been used a variety of technologies such as Spring Framework, Thymeleaf, Bootstrap, jQuery, Hibernate, Hibernate Validator, Google ZXing and tools like integrated development environment Spring Tool Suite, Apache Maven and Apache Tomcat.
Application was divided on three parts. First parts is the public space with provide a basic functionality such as login, register a new account, order shipment, shipment monitoring, shipment account history and change account data panel. These features can be found n in each competitive solution. Another element of application is administrative part and its available only for authorized users. It contains pages that provide functionality like register a new courier account and shipment management panel, with is necessary to proper functioning of company. The last part of application is REST API, with provide service for courier mobile terminal. It is responsible for synchronize courier tasks with web mobile platform and send information about delivered and received shipments. The most important part of each delivered shipping is receiver signature, which is sent from mobile application to web platform and stored in database.
To provide a high level of security from unauthorized access to aplication are used technology such as Spring Security and Spring OAuth2.

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Moje uwagi:
The 'goal of this thesis' (cos mi sie tutaj nie podoba, mozna po prostu...This thesis concerns) 'was' (niepotr) (brak przedimka) 'develop' (tu ma byc rzeczownik) (brakuje slowa) a web application to manage a courier company with (brak przedimka) additional support of courier mobile terminal as (przedimek) Android phone application.
In developing (brak slowa) application 'has been used' (w zly miejscu) a variety of technologies such as Spring Framework, Thymeleaf, Bootstrap, jQuery, Hibernate, Hibernate Validator, Google ZXing and tools like integrated development environment Spring Tool Suite, Apache Maven and Apache Tomcat (were used).
'Application' (nie rpozumiem czego) was divided 'on' (za bardzo po polsku, tu jest kalka z 'na' po ang. mowimy INTO) three parts. (przedimek) first parts is the public space 'with' (zle slowo) provideS 'a' (niepotr) basic functionality such as (przedimek) login, registerING a new account, order shipment, shipment monitoring, shipment account history and change account data panel. These features can be found in each 'competitive solution' (nie rozumiem co to jest). Another element of (przedimek) application is (przedimek) administrative part and its availabILIYTY only for authorized users. It contains pages that provide functionality like register a new courier account and shipment management panel, with is necessary to proper functioning of (przedimek) company. The last part of (przedimek) application is REST API, 'with' (dlaczego piszesz slowo 'with' jak nie masz tego na mysli, ty myslisz o innym slowie) provideS (przedimek) service for (przedimek) courier mobile terminal. It is responsible for synchronizATION (brak slowa) (przedimek) courier tasks with web mobile platform and sendING information about delivered and received shipments. The most important part 'of each delivered shipping' (niepotr) is (przedimek) receiver'S signature, which is sent from (przedimek) mobile application to (przedimek) web platform and stored in (przedimek) database.
(In order to) provide a high level of security from unauthorized access to (przedimek) aplication 'are used' (na koncu zdania) technology such as Spring Security and Spring OAuth2 (were used).