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It offers exciting swimming holidays, on waters in different places around the world.
Very popular are areas around the Greek Islands.
You can travel after them, swimming from one island to another.
The company has a lot of interesting offers.
You can flow 5 km Hellospont where connects to the Mediterranean Sea with the Black Sea and where Europe joins Asia.
Or do the shorter swim from the prison island of Alcatraz
acrossthe bay to San Francisco.


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When an Australian called Simon Murie realised that he wasn't the only the person who preferred swimming in open waters to swimming in the pool, he decided to start a companycalled SwimTrek. If offers exciting swimming holidays in lake, rivers and the sea in different places the world.
A real favourite is around the greek islands. What better way to travel from one island to the next than by walking off the beach into the water, swimming for a couple of hours,and then arriving on another beautiful beach on another beautiful island?

If you haven't got much time, you could choose one of their special breaks. Try the swim across the hellespont- the 5 km stretch of water near troy , where the Mediterraneam meets the Black sea and where europe joins Asia. Or do the shorter swim from the pirson island of Alcatraz across the bay to San Francisco, with views of the Golden Gate Bridge to your right and San Francisco's beautiful skyline in front of you.

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It offers exciting swimming holidays, on waters NA WODACH? in different places around the world.
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The company has a lot of interesting offers.
You can flow=TAK MOZNA POWIEDZIEC O RZECE 5 km TU CZEGOS BRAK Hellospont where BRAK PODMIOTU, PODEJRZEWAM, ZE PODMIOTEM JEST MORZE SRODZIEMNE connects to the Mediterranean Sea with the Black Sea and where Europe joins Asia.
Or do the ZLY PRZEDIMEK, TO NIE JEST JEDYNA KROTSZA TRASA NA SWIECIE shorter swim from the prison island of Alcatraz
acrossthe bay to San Francisco.

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