Healthy living-prośba o sprawdzenie

Proszę o sprawdzenie dwóch zadań. Jestem początkującym, więc prosiłbym o w miarę jasne wyjaśnienie błędów . Polecenia tworzyłem sam, więc mogą znaleźć się błędy również w nich.

1. Write a few of advices for people, which want have a healthy diet.

People, which want have a healthy diet and to be fit should:
1. Eat more fresh fruits and vegetables instead of chocolate.
2. Drink more mineral water, at least 1,5 l in day.
3. Don't smoke cigarettes.
4. Doing exercises, such as jogging or aerobic.
5. Don't drink alkohol.

2. Write five questions for a healthy survey.

1. How often do you eat fruits?
2. Do you drink more readily water or orange fruit?
3. Do you smoke?
4. How many times in week do you do exercise?
5. How many hours in day do you usually sleep?

advice niepoliczalny
people WHO want to eat healthy
should not - nie dawaj dont ani do
a day
alcohol
co to readily water?
do you exercise

People, which want have a healthy diet and to be fit should: to nie pasuje do twoich 'advices'. Zwłaszcza słowo diet;)
ani doing
aerobic = przymiotnik

1. Write a few 'of advices' (cos takiego nie istnieje, tutaj ...words of advice - i napewno to miales na mysli) for people, 'which' (jak mowimy o ludziach to zawsze 'who') want (cos brak) have a healthy diet.

People, which want have a healthy diet and to be fit should:
3. Don't smoke cigarettes. - to niema sensu - bo '...to be fit should don't smoke' - niema sensu - pomysl nad tym.
4. Doing exercises, such as jogging or aerobic. - tutaj tak samo....you should 'doing'?
5. Don't drink alkohol. - tutaj tak samo.

2. Write five questions for a 'healthy' (zla czesc zdania) survey.
1. How often do you eat 'fruits' (wg mnie l. poj)?
2. Do you drink more readily water or 'orange fruit' (tegio nie miales na mysli?)?
4. How many times in (brak przedimka) week do you 'do' (wg mnie niepotr) exercise?
5. How many hours in (przedimek) day do you usually sleep?

Poprawiłem. Mogę prosić o ponowne sprawdzenie?



1. Write a few of advice for people, who want to eat healthy

People, who want to eat healthy diet and to be fit should:
1. Eat more fresh fruit and vegetables instead of chocolate.
2. Drink more mineral water, at least 1,5 l a day.
3. You should not smoke cigarettes and don't take drugs.
4. You should doing exercises, such as jogging or aerobics.
5. You should not drink alcohol.

2. Write five questions for a survey a health.

1. How often do you eat fruit?
2. Do you drink more readily water or orange fruit? (Tutaj w znaczeniu: Czy pijesz chętniej wodę czy sok pomarańczowy)
3. Do you smoke?
4. How many times in a week do you exercise?
5. How many hours in a day do you usually sleep?

WORDS of advice
1. Dlaczego akurat chocolate? Czyli można jeść ciastka lody i cukierki?
Co 3, 4 i 5 porada ma wspólnego z diet?
Lampkę wina można przy kolacji? Albo piwko z lodówki? Może napisz zeby nie nadużywać alkoholu;)

Dlaczego nie poprawiles tak, jak ja wyzej napisalam....czy mnie totalnie ignorujesz, a pozniej chcesz zebym to samo poprawiala? Tak nie bedziemy sie bawic...
1. Write a few (tutaj cos brakuje - napisalam Ci wyzej, ale ty tego nie zauwazyles, to znaczy, ze nie chcesz byc poprawiany) of advice for people, who want to eat healthy

People, who want to eat (a gdzie jest przedimek? brakuje go tutaj) healthy diet and to be fit should:
3. 'You' (wczesniej piszesz ogolnie o 'ludziach' a teraz adresujesz to do 'you' a niby dlaczego? napisalam Ci to wyzej - consistency) should not smoke cigarettes and 'don't' (to zmieniasz jak bedzie do wszystkich) take drugs.
4. 'You' (slowo calkowicie niepotr) Should 'doing' (zle slowo) exercises, such as jogging or aerobics.
5. 'You' (niepotr) should not drink alcohol.
2. Write five questions for a survey a health.
3. Do you drink more readily water or 'orange fruit?' (nie, tutaj masz na mysli 'orange juice' po prostu nie uwierze, ze nigsy nie spotkales sie z tym slowem)