Ostrzegam ze jestem SUROWA and don't suffer fools.
A lot of people want to go (tu brakuje slowa) college. They 'are must' (co to za polaczenie slow? po co?) choose 'when' (kiedy? chyba nie to mialas na mysli) want (brak slowa) 'living' (zle slowo) (brak 2 slowa) hall of residence or rent 'of' (calkowicie zle slowo) flat? Many people choose (brak przedimka) hall of residence. 'It' (dokladnie CO? bo nie mowisz o tym wczesniej) is quite a controversial issue and there are several ways of looking at this question. Let 'is' (zle slowo) look at advantages and disadvantages of living 'academician' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego zlowa tutuaj). One of the advantages is that (przedimek) hall of residence is cheaper than (przedimek) rent of (przedimek) flat. It is (przedimek) good solution for people 'witch' (co tu czarownice robia? ) do not have a lot (brak slowa) money. It is said that you can meet a lot of friendly, easygoing people (ale gdzie? musisz napisac) . Moreover you can expect (przedimek) awesome party with fun-loving people. Many believe that you have 'to internet' (tego nie rozumiem) and gym 'do' (zle slowo) you do not have to pay for that. One of the disadvantages of (przedimek) hall of residence is that you do not have privacy. You have to 'living' (zle slowo) with (przedimek) flatmate and you do not know 'exacly' (ortog) who 'is it' (zla kolejnosc slow). He or 'She' (dlaczego duza litera?) can be messy, nasty and can be (przedimek) thief. It is 'throught' (ortog) that you have to share (przedimek) bathroom and 'wasching' (ortog) 'maschine' (ortog) and 'all' (nie wiem co to jest to 'all' - co to dokladnie znaczy i w jaki sposob to mozna 'share'). Another minus is that 'others' (other) students can 'do' (zle slowo, you do not 'do' a party, you ' masz' party) 'the' (zly przedimek) party when 'toy' (ortog) want to learn and will be 'aloud' (ortog). Some people claim that you have 'to' (zle slowo) small, tight room and you do not have 'to' (zle slowo) well-equipped. To sum up 'i' (zawse, bez zadnego wyjatku, to slowo piszemy DUZA litera) think that living in (rzedimek) 'academician' (zle slowo) is quite a controversial issue but 'i' (popraw) can 'living' (zle slowo) there.
Zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the) - bo ich nie rozumiesz. Popraw wszystkie ortografie slow.