Sprawdzenie i ewentualna poprawa

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Dear Arthur
It was good to hear from you again.
I'm writing to tell you about my new friend. I met her last saturday in one of the cafes in center. I was drinking cafe and watching news .
At this moment she was sitting in front of me and we started talking. At first glance she looked like anthusiastic and postive person.

After this event, we started meeting. Her name is Angelin, she's fiendly funny and kind.. Somtames she is little arrogant cause she is very ambitious person. What's more, she is smart and energetic , always she invietes me to various fun.

We are very smilar, buoys like rock music(she are amazing playing guitar). We like playing basketball and going to cinema.

By the way in October in my town is concert Linkin Park, you must come too me I met you with Angelia and we will go to this concert.

Take care
przedimki przed center, glance, person, cinema, concert
zamien this na that
invites to fun, she are - to nic nie znaczy
sporo literowek/bledow ortograf. np. sometemes, too

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