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In the next part of the article author focus on a topic of language and shows how important
it is in our daily life. She refers to Roesseau's position who claims that the first human
language is lyrical and till now it plays a big role in our life while it may seems that
the need of expressing deep personal emotion has been somewhat stifled. Nonetheless we
can see it in contemporary music. It makes that we see a lot of people with headphones everyday.
The lirycal is language of love, of desire, of workship and of suffering. And in cities where
everyone is stranger we need it. In the world which focuses on technology, this kind of voice is irreplaceable. It makes that we feel special. And we also feel special when we listen to Uberlin.
When author of essey was away from home and and she heard this song she felt the voice took her on a journey back there. It shows power of this music. In facts, there are two hero of song. The lyrical subject and the city that surrounds you. The city of distraction filled with signs and advertisments. The city which is unpredictable seems to be made tame by the man who walks through. The official lyrics video is like GPS for soul. Uberlin with its references to railway system is some kind of metaphore for life journey.
In the next part of the article PRZEDIMEK author focus < --ZŁA FORMA on a ZŁY PRZEDIMEK topic of language and shows how important
it is in our daily life. She refers to Roesseau's< -TO SIE INACZEJ PISZE position who claims that the first human language is lyrical and till now it plays JA BYM DAŁ INNY CZA a big role in our life while it may seems< --ZLA FORMA that the need of expressing PRZEDIMEK deep personal emotion has been somewhat stifled. Nonetheless we can see it in contemporary music. It makes that we see a lot of people with headphones everyday< -- NIE ROZUMIEM TEGO ZDANIA, NAPISZ TO INACZEJ.
The lirycal is language of love, of desire, of workship and of suffering. And in cities where
everyone is A stranger we need it. In the world which focuses on technology, this kind of voice is irreplaceable. It makes US feel special. And we also feel special when we listen to Uberlin.
When author of PRZEDIMEKessey ORTOGRAFwas away from home and and she heard this song she felt the voice took her on a journey back there.
The 'lirycal' (ortog) is (brak przedimka) language of love, of desire, of workship and of suffering. 'And' (nie zaczynaj zdan z 'and' to nie jest funkcja tego w zdaniu) in cities where everyone is A stranger we need 'it' (nie za bardzo rozumem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi).
'And' (ujmij to inaczej) we also feel special when we listen to Uberlin.
When (przedimek) author of PRZEDIME Kessey ORTOGRAF was away from home and 'and' (niepotr) she heard this song she felt THAT the voice took her on a journey back there.