A formal letter ( asking for information )

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TEMAT LISTU:
Imagine you are interested in booking the Murder Mystery Tour. Plan a formal letter to Mr Clarke. Ask for information about these aspects of the holiday:
- meeting time and meeting place.
- costumes for the weekend event and acting involved.
- cost of meals and availability of vegetarian meals.
- reduced prices for students and for sharing rooms.

Dear Mr Clarke,
I read your advertisement and I would like to book this trip but I have a few questions. I would be grateful, if you could give me an answer.

Could you tell me in what place in London meet is planned and at what time? Also i would like to know whether the party is a costume party and if so, the a strictly themed for example full of blood and what about involves acting. At what price will be the meals because I would to know what budget I must allocate on it? And important for me is could I heve a opportunity to buy vegetarian meals, because I am a vegetarian for several years. Also I would be interested in knowing is it possible there are discounts for studensts and whether would be the possibility of I could shared a only with my friend, because I like privacy.

I look foward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
xyz
Dear Mr Clarke,
I read your advertisement ALE GDZIE? and I would like to book this trip ALE JAKĄ? but I have a few questions. I would be grateful, if you could give me an answer.

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I look foward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
xyz

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