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Może ktoś sprawdzić poprawność gramatyczną i ortograficzną w moim artykule. Miałam pisać o tym co by się stało jakby skończyła się elektryczność.

Better world?

Nowadays, we can not imagine a world without electricity. A day without radio or television seems to be impassible. However, we should think what would happen when electricity disappear,
When someone wants to do laundry or vaccum the apartment has to work hard. Normal household job take more time. People are more tired and they can not think about anything besides responsibilities. They do not go to cinemas and theatres, because it is a waste of time. Entertainment stops be so important.
Nonetheless, many people find work. Tasks performed by machines, will be availabe for human. A few people can take place of one machines. As a result, unemployment will fall and will earn more.
Without electricity we save much money. We do not have to change fridge or buy new mobile phone. We will not pay bills for electricity and light. We will able to buy more and our standard of living will rise.
To be honest. life without electricity is easier. Without electrical appliamces we would more independently and creative. Because electricity is killing our creative. We can not think outside the stencil. We are predictable and boring. A world without electricity would gain a lot but surely lose a lot too.


Bardzo zależy mi na czasie!!!!
z gór dziękuje bardzo :)))

LEPIEJ Z PRZEDIMKIEM Better world?

Nowadays, we canRAZEMnot imagine a world without electricity. A day without radio or television seems to be impassible ORTOGR. However, we should think what would happen when electricity disappear, KONCOWKA NIEGRAMATYCZNA, UZYJ DRUGIEGO TRYBU WARUNKOWEGO
TE WSZYSTKIE ZDANIA MUSZA BYC W DRUGIMTRYBIE WARUNKOWYM When someone wants to do laundry or vaccum ORTOGR the apartment BRAK PODMIOTU has to work hard. PRZEDIMEK Normal household job take more time. People are more tired and they can not think about anything besides responsibilities. They do not go to cinemas and theatres, because it is a waste of time. Entertainment stops beING so important.
Nonetheless, many people find work. Tasks performed by machines, will be availabe ORTOGR for humanS. A few people can take place of one machines JEDNA MASZYNY?. As a result, unemployment will fall and BRAK PODMIOTU will earn more.
Without electricity we save much money. We do not have to change NASZEJ fridge or buy PRZEDIMEK new mobile phone. We will not pay bills for electricity and light. We will BRAK CZASOWNIKA able to buy more and our standard of living will rise.
To be honest. life without electricity is easier. Without electrical appliamces we would BRAK CZASOWNIKA more independently BEZ -LY, TU MA BYC PRZYMIOTNIK and creative. Because electricity is killing our creative ZABIJA NASZ KREATYWNY. We can not think outside the stencil BOX. We are predictable and boring. A world without electricity would gain a lot but surely lose a lot too.

WSZYSTKIE PRZEWIDYWANIA MUSZA BYC NAPISANE W DRUGIM TRYBIE WARUNKOWYM

...nie lubię i nigdy nie lubilem zaczynać zdań od 'because "..-to nie jest zbyt zgrabne .Prędzej inaczej , cos w rozdaju : 'Moreover, Nevertheless , Quite apart from anything else , Above that ,...

>>>..nie lubię i nigdy nie lubilem zaczynać zdań od 'because "..
Serduszko, czy ty mnie kopiujesz z tym? 'Because' nigdy a nigdy nie powinno zaczynac zdania. Koniec kropka.

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