Sprawdzenie listu

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Hej,
jest ktoś, kto mógłby sprawdzić ten list? Byłbym wdzięczny
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1. Właśnie się dowiedziałeś/aś , że w internetowym konkursie wygrałeś/aś pewną rzecz. W e-mailu do kolegi:
- Poinformuj co wygrałeś i wyraź zadowolenie z otrzymanej nagrody
- Napisz co musiałeś zrobić żeby wygrać
- Opisz następny konkurs w którym masz zamiar wziąć udział
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Hi, John!
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Hi, John!
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