Krótki speach do planszy - sprawdzenie tekstu.

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To mój pierwszy post na tym forum, więc nie wiem jak tu jest ale liczę że pomożecie mi w problemie do którego opisania już przechodzę.
Mam do przygotowania krótki speach na temat planszy, którą tutaj zamieszczę. Nie chodzi o opis obrazka a o wypowiedzenie się na temat który ona prezentuje. Jestem na 3 roku studiów na polibudzie i jestem troche noga z angielskiego. Muszę zaliczyć angielski z dobrymi ocenami żeby być zwolniony z egzaminu certyfikującego jaki muszę zdać teraz w tym semestrze. Czy ktoś mógłby sprawdzić mój 2 minutowy speach czy jest poprawny gramatycznie? Jeśli komuś wpadnie na myśl jeszcze jakieś fajne zdanie o które można by wzbogacić prezentację to bardzo proszę. Posiłkowałem się trochę translatorem a trochę sam coś pisałem używając czasami gotowych wyrażeń z książki. Dzięki za pomoc:)

Oto polecenie:

"Look at the graphics below and prepare a short talk on commuting to work/school (2 min).
You are not expected to describe the pictures but cover the subject that you associate with them.
Now, you have 2 minutes to present your ideas."

Niestety nie mogę zamieścić tutaj obrazka:( Plansza zawiera tylko dwie grupy wykresów słupkowych: w jednej grupie jest zestawienie państw w których poruszanie się po mieście zajmuje najdłużej czasu a w drugiej grupie na osi Y (Commuters' satisfaction rate) poziom skuteczności i zadowolenia dla różnych środków transportu (Oś X - means of commuting)


A o to mój speach:

The theme of my speech will be as we move into the daily way to school or work. What means of transport they are more a more efficient and faster, and what are the causes of a long journey in the respective countries.

In the middle of the board is shown a graph showing the amount of time in minutes it is on average around the city for individual countries. The above list is dominated by Eastern European countries like Hungary or Romania. In third place are the United states. Poland is only in fifth place. In shortest time travel Italians. The length of time in which travel is influenced by many factors: the number of inhabitants in the city, traffic and congested streets and roads, an efficient system of roads and communications in the cities.

In the upper left corner of the board are charts that show satisfaction with the effectiveness of different means of transport. Based on the survey it can be concluded that the most effective means of travel is cycling. Also, (also) a lot more people prefer to travel on foot than to use public transport or car ect ect. Travelling by car has gained the least points. Traveling on foot or by bicycle, despite the drawbacks which is a long time to move, it carries many advantages as health benefits, no need to wait in a traffic jam, no hassle with parking space, saving money - no need to refuel a car or pay for bus tickets and ease of getting in hard to reach places or where there is a ban on entry by car. People traveling by car or public transport, even though it move faster, are upset a crowded bus or tram. Also annoying is the lateness of buses or standing in a traffic jam car.
Nowadays, people far more often opt for alternative means of transport as a bicycle or travel on foot because it is beneficial for the health and improves the efficiency of the body, less costs and makes satisfaction.

SPEECH

The theme of my speech will be NIE ROZUMIEM 'AS WE MOVE', TO TRANSLATOR? as we move into the daily way BEZ SENSU 'WCHODZIMY NA CODZIENNĄ DROGĘ' to school or work. What means of transport they NIEGRAMATYCZNE. are more a NIEZROZUMIALE, NIEGRAMATYCZNE more efficient and faster, and what are the causes of a long journey in the respective countries. O JAKICH NAGLE KRAJACH MOWISZ?

In the middle of the board is shown a graph showing the amount of time in minutes it is ZLY CZASOWNIK on average around the city JAKIEGO MIASTA? for individual countries. The above list is dominated by Eastern European countries like Hungary or Romania. In PRZEDIMEK third place are NIE 'ARE' the United states NIE ROZUMIEM, SKORO PISZESZ 'LIKE HUNGARY OR ROAMNAI', TOZNACZY, ZE WYMIENIASZ WIECEJ TYCH KRAJOW, SKAD USA NA TRZECIM MIEJSCU? . Poland is only DLACZEGO 'ONLY'? in fifth place. In shortest time travel Italians SLOWO W SLOWO Z POLSKIEGO. NIEGRAMATYCZNE. The length of time in which travel W KTORYM PODROZ?? is influenced by many factors: the number of inhabitants in the city, traffic and congested streets and roads, an efficient system of roads and communications in the cities.

In the upper left corner of the board are charts that show satisfaction with the effectiveness of different means of transport. Based on the survey it can be concluded that the most effective means of travel is cycling. Also, (also) CO MA ZNACZYC TO POWTORZENIE? ZA KOGO TY MASZ OSOBY POMAGAJACE NA TYM FORUM, ZE NIE CHCIALO CI SIE SPRAWDZIC TEGO, CO WYPLUL TRANSLATOR a lot more people prefer to travel on foot than to use public transport or car ect ect. Travelling by car has gained the least ZLE SLOWO 'LEAST' points. Traveling on foot or by bicycle, despite the drawbacks which is a long time to move JAKI MOVE?, it NIEGRAMATYCZNIE POWTORZONY PODMIOT carries many advantages as health benefits, no need to wait in a traffic jam, no hassle with parking space, saving money - no need to refuel a car or pay for bus tickets and ease of getting in ZLY PRZYIMEK hard to reach places or where there is a ban on entry by car. People traveling by car or public transport, even though it move ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA faster, are upset BRAK SLOWA a crowded bus or tram. Also annoying is the lateness of buses or standing ZLY CZASOWNIK in a traffic jam car.
Nowadays, people far more often opt for alternative means of transport BRAK SLOWA as a bicycle or travel on foot because it is beneficial for the health and improves the efficiency of the body, less costs ZLY SZYK and makes satisfaction.

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The theme of my speech will be 'as we move into' (cos tu nie tak, mozna dac 'the daily commute to school or work) the daily way to school or work. What means of transport 'they' (niepotrzebne slowo) are more 'a' (niepotr) 'more' (niepotr) efficient and faster, and what are the causes of a long journey in the respective countries.

In the middle of the board 'is shown' (niepotr) a graph 'showing' (zrob to inaczej, daj slowo 'shows') the 'amount of' (nieptor) time in minutes 'it is' (niepotr) 'on' (tutaj dalabym'for') 'average around' (tego nie rozumiem) the city for individual countries. The 'above' (niepotr) list is dominated by Eastern European countries like Hungary or Romania. In third place are the United States (of America).
'In shortest time travel Italians' (zrob to biernie, Italians travel the shortest time). The length of (travelling) time 'in which travel' (nieptor) is influenced by many factors: the number of inhabitants in the city, traffic and congested streets and roads, an efficient system of roads and communications in the cities.

Also, a lot more people prefer to 'travel on foot' (a dlaczego nie uzyles 'walk, prefer to walk) than to use public transport or car 'ect ect' (nie rozumiem jaki to jest srodek transportowy - ten etc?!!).
'Traveling' (uwazaj, bo raz piszez 'travelling' BrE a raz 'traveling - AmE - consistency) on foot or by bicycle, despite the drawbacks 'which is a long time to move' (cos tu nie tak, lepiej...which of course take the longest time), 'it' (ale mowisz o 'walking i bicycle - to sa 2 srodki - tutaj 'they') 'carries' (carry) many advantages SUCH as health benefits, no need to wait in a traffic jam, no hassle with parking space, saving money - no need to refuel 'a' THE car or TO pay for bus tickets and ease of getting in hard to reach places or where there is a ban on entry by car. People traveling by car or public transport, even though 'it' (daj tutaj 'they') move faster, are upset BY a crowded bus or tram. Also annoying is the lateness of buses or (daj tutaj 'a car') standing in a traffic jam 'car' (w zlym miejscu).
Nowadays, people far more often opt for alternative means of transport SUCH as a bicycle or travelLING on foot because it is beneficial for the health and improves the efficiency of the body, 'less costs' (zla kolejnosc slow, tutaj 'costs less) and 'makes' (daj slowo 'gives') (tutaj mozna dac 'personal') satisfaction.

Poprawiłem co umiałem, nadal coś jest gramatycznie źle?

The theme of my speech will be about the way of commuting to work or school. I will try to answer the questions: What means of transport are more efficient and faster and what are the causes of a long journey in the respective countries of Europe and whole world.

In the middle of the board is shown a graph that represents the average amount of time in minutes to travel around the random citys for individual countries. The above list is dominated by Eastern European countries like Hungary or Romania on the second place. In the third place is the United states. Poland is in fifth place. Italians travels in shortest time. The length of time travel is influenced by many factors: the number of inhabitants in the city, traffic and congested streets and roads, an efficient system of roads and communications in the cities.

In the upper left corner of the board are charts that show satisfaction with the effectiveness of different means of transport. Based on the survey it can be concluded that the most effective means of travel is cycling. Also, a lot more people prefer to travel on foot than to use public transport or car ect ect. Travelling by car has gained the least points. Traveling on foot or by bicycle, despite the drawbacks which is a long time to move, it carries many advantages as health benefits, no need to wait in a traffic jam, no hassle with parking space, saving money - no need to refuel a car or pay for bus tickets and ease of getting in hard to reach places or where there is a ban on entry by car. People traveling by car or public transport, even though it move faster, are upset a crowded bus or tram. Also annoying is the lateness of buses or standing in a traffic jam car.
Nowadays, people far more often opt for alternative means of transport as a bicycle or travel on foot because it is beneficial for the health and improves the efficiency of the body, less costs and makes satisfaction.

Dzięki piękne za poprawki:) Tą poprawioną wypowiedź który tutaj zamieściłem również uzupełniłem o Twoje poprawki terii. Dzięki jeszcze raz:)