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Witam serdecznie, proszę o sprawdzenie wpisu na bloga na temat ulubionej postaci z życia publicznego. (Wpis musiał zawierać przedstawienie osoby i wyjaśnienie dlaczego dużo się o niej mówi, charakter, wygląd, za co ją podziwiam, a także moje przypuszczenia na temat jej przyszłych losów. )Z góry bardzo dziękuję za pomoc♥

Hi everyone! Today I want to start a thread about our favourite celebrities. We've heard a lot of about Michał Szpak recently. He's making headlines at the moment because he's adopted a child.
Michał is one of the most popular singer in our country. He's a very courageous and imaginative person who always puruses a goal. He frecquently stands out from the crowd because he usually wears unusual and original clothes. His distinguishing features are long curly hair and painted nails.
I admire his positive attitude towards life. I always hear his songs when I've a bad mood. I've a lot of respect for this person because he's using his fame and money to help others. Due to adoption he gave a plenty of happiness and love to child from orphanage. Everyone should try to help other people.
I think he may be admired most for being not only an amazing singer but also warm-hearted, helpful person.I believe he'll win the Eurovision and learn everybody how we can give the others joy.
That's all from me. Thanks for reading this piece. Now it's your turn!
He's a very courageous and imaginative person who always puruses a goal. He frecquently stands out from the crowd because he usually wears unusual and original clothes. His distinguishing features are long curly hair and painted nails.
I admire his positive attitude towards life. I always hear INNE SŁOWO..TO his songs when I've FORM OF 'BE' ..IN a bad mood.
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I think he may be admired most for being not only an amazing singer but also A warm-hearted, helpful person.I believe he'll win the Eurovision and learn INNE SŁOWO everybody how we can give the others joy.
That's all from me. Thanks for reading this piece. Now it's your turn!
Dziękuję bardzo! ♥

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