PROSZE O POMOC W SPRAWDZENIU POPRAWNOSCI TEGO TEKS

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Once upon a time there was a Gorilla, named James. He was prisoner in the Zoo. The guardians treat him not well. Some boy find him cold and wet in the cage. The boy wanted to help Gorilla escape. He stool the keys and opend the cage. This Zoo was near to forest and they must get through the river. Gorilla and boy get on the boat. Ten minutes later the boy sigh with relief. They ware safe and the Gorilla wa free. The guardians wanted to catch him but was to late.
PROSZE O SYZBKIE ODPWOIEDZI I Z GORY DZIEKUJE ZA POMOC :)
wiele czasownikow jest z bezokoliczniku, a nie w formie czasu przeszlego. Brakuje kilku przedimkow, ale to mniejszy problem. Popraw te czasowniki, potem pomoge z reszta.
Once upon a time there was a Gorilla, named James. It was imprisoned in zoo. The guardians didn't treat him very well. Some boy found him cold and wet in the cage. The boy wanted to help Gorilla escape. He stole the keys and opend the cage. This Zoo was near the forest and he had to get through the river. Gorilla and boy get on the boat. Ten minutes later the boy sigh with relief. They ware safe and the Gorilla was free. The guardians wanted to catch him but it was too late.

Poprawilem chyba to o czym pisałes a co dalej ??
Once upon a time there was a Gorilla named James. It was imprisoned (uwięziony, normalnie sie mowi kept)
>in A zoo.

opend -brak litery
near A forest
get ACROSS A river TOO.
THE Gorilla and THE boy
get -CZAS
on A boat.
sigh -CZAS
ware ORTOGRAFIA

CZEMU GORILLA WIELKĄ LITERĄ?

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