sprawdzi ktoś ?

Hej angielski to moja pięta achillesowa mógl mi ktoś sprawdzić blędy w liście ?? pliss

Dear Mr. President town of Bydgoszcz.

We are writing to ask for your support for a very important question.
Every year beafore holliday in our town people leving very much animals. Especiality dogs and cats. Unfortunately hospices for animals are not on cheapened guarantee them worthy conditions life. We wishes organize concert, where of funds stays intend for this animals. Presence of this concert declared Polish rock stars like Maryla Rodowicz and Natalia Kukulska. Total concert take the famules and excellent actor Maciej Sthur. We ask for to assent to this concert. Dogs and cats are living animals. They breathing, feel and have a heart and are our friends.
Please help our Mr President.

Yours faithfully
Board of directors schools 11 secondary school in Bydgoszcz.

Jan Kowalski

>Dear Mr. President town of Bydgoszcz.

Bydgoszcz to miasto nie miasteczko - to po pierwsze :)
Dear Mr. President of Bydgoszcz.

levin -> leaving
holliday -> holiday


> animals. Especiality dogs and cats
animals - especially dogs and cats



> hospices for animals are not on cheapened guarantee them worthy conditions life
hospices for animals cannot guarantee them worthy life

> We wishes organize concert, where of funds stays intend for this animals.
We wish to organize concert, to raise funds for animals.

>Presence of this concert declared Polish rock stars like Maryla Rodowicz and Natalia Kukulska.
Polish rock stars like Maryla Rodowicz and Natalia Kukulska declared their presence on the concert.

> Total concert take the famules and excellent actor Maciej Sthur. We ask for to assent to this concert.
Tutaj nie wiem "co autor chciał powiedzieć"

> Dogs and cats are living animals. They breathing, feel and have a heart and are our friends.

Dogs and cats are a living animals - they breathing, feel and are our friends.

> Please help our Mr President.
Please help us Mr President.

> Board of directors schools 11 secondary school in Bydgoszcz.
Director of 11th secondary school in Bydgoszcz.

>>Dear Mr. President town of Bydgoszcz.
>
>Bydgoszcz to miasto nie miasteczko - to po pierwsze :)
>Dear Mr. President of Bydgoszcz.


wystarczy samo: Dear Mr President,

Pod warunkiem, że umieści w nagłówku adres :)