prosze o sprawdzenie wypracowania!!:*

Mam ogromna prosbe mogl by ktos to sparawdzic bo kolezanka mi napisala a ja pewna nie jestem !!


I went sleep I asleep sound sleep and and I began dreams. The dream was strange but funny too. I changed in the elf in the dream which he got along and helped children. I helped small girl, she lost doll which was favourite toy whose never left. I was very small elf and I was smart and I could came everywhere. I would help the girl and I found doll. I groped even in all mouse of tear and in recess and I finally proved that her dog carried out toy to yours hut. The dog want that the girl spend more time with him. The small girl was very rejoiced and she was very happy that I helped her. And the dog became friend mine and her. When the girl was ill the dog was all time with her so me as a elf I brought elixir which helped her. She quickly went to health. Exactly then my mum to woke up. because was season on the cures because I was ill and I was in bed. I think the dream wasn’t chance because join In my illness while I had temperature activity my fantasy.

Prosze :*:*:*:*:*bede wdzieczna:*:*

chyba nie tylko sama to pisala, bo widze tutaj duza pomoc translatora.

wlasnie wiem ale jest bardzo zle??;/;/

te zdania nie sa gramatyczne:
I went sleep I asleep sound sleep and and I began dreams.
I changed in the elf in the dream which he got along and helped children.
I helped small girl, she lost doll which was favourite toy whose never left.
I was very small elf and I was smart and I could came everywhere.
I would help the girl and I found doll.
I groped even in all mouse of tear and in recess and I finally proved that her dog carried out toy to yours hut.
The dog want that the girl spend more time with him.
The small girl was very rejoiced and she was very happy that I helped her.
And the dog became friend mine and her.
When the girl was ill the dog was all time with her so me as a elf I brought elixir which helped her.
She quickly went to health.
Exactly then my mum to woke up.
because was season on the cures because I was ill and I was in bed.
I think the dream wasn't chance because join In my illness while I had
temperature activity my fantasy.

Bo to tak miało być po polsku ....kurcze ...sprawdzcie to prosze :*:*

polozylam sie spac,zasnelam twardym snem i zaczelam snic.sen ten byl dziwny a zarazem smieszny.snilo mi sie ze zmienilam sie w elfa ktory w kazdej sytuacji dawal sobie rad, pomagalam w szczegolnosci dzieciom ktore nie mogly sobie poradzic w roznych sprawach. pomagalam dziewczynce ktorej zaginela lalka byla to jej ulubiona zabawka z ktora sie nigdy nie rozstawala.ja jako maly elf bylam sprytna i moglam wszedzie wejsc chcialam bardzo jej pomoc w odnalezieniu zguby.szukalam wszedzie zagladalam w kazda mysia dziurę i w kazde zakamarek az w koncu okazalo sie ze to jej przyjaciel pies wyniusl lalke do swojej budy chcial aby dziewczynka poswiecala mu wiecej czasu.dziewczynaka bardzo sie ucieszyla i byla szczesliwa ze jej pomoglam a pies zostal przyjacielem dziewczynki i lalki.gdy dziewczynaka zachorowala pies wraz z lalka nie odstepowal jej na krok.czowal w kazdej chwili gdy tylko zaczela sie ruszac an byl przy niej. ja jako elf przynioslam jej eliksir ktory mial jej szybko przywrocic zdrowie.gdy tylko dziewczynka wypila eliksir wyzdrowiala. w tym momencie obudzila mnie mama ktora przyniosla mi lekarstwa gdyz bylam chora i lezalam w lozku ten sen byl raczej nie przypadkowy bo zbiegal sie z moja choroba. podczas gdy mialam goraczke dzialala moja wyobraznia

a moglby ktos mi pomoc ulozyc te zdania garmatycznie ja nie znam zbyt j.ang a zalezy mi na tym wypracowaniu!! prosze:*:*