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2) Time is money. Some people believe that making money is the most important thing in the live. Do u feel that this believe is stronger in some countries than in others.

First of all, Nowadays Some people in the world think that If U have money U have everything, but I disagree with this sentence. They suppose that money give them happiness. Furthermore they don’t waste time, they have tightly scheduled day. On the other hand They havn`t got leisure time, they don`t maintain friendship, they prefer career then family , Finally they are alone…. Despite that They are exhausted and overwork, they can’t slow down…
Secondly workaholizm is a problem in rich country Such as : Canada USA, France, GB, German. In this country employee have to do things quickly and efficient. They are pressed for time, time is their enemy. They think that life is too short to relax, They are always stressed, so their health is in bad condition. They suffer a heart attack.
On the other hand, Life in poor country such as Brazil, Argentina and African countries is slow Everybody have time, they don’t live under stress, They are as poor as church mouse, but they are glad. They have large time on one’s hand, They can queue 2days and they don’t get irritated
To sum up, this words “Time is money”, depend on type of person character and place in the world.

2) Time is money. Some people believe that making money is the most
important thing in theIR liveS. Do 'u' (uuuu) YOU feel that this 'believe' BELIEF is stronger in some countries than in others.

First of all, nowadays sSome people in the world think that if 'U' YOU have
money 'U' (nieznam tego 'U' chcialabym jego poznac- YOU)-have everything, but I disagree with this sentence. They suppose that money CAN give them happiness. Furthermore they don't waste ANY time, they have A tightly scheduled day. On the other hand they havEn`t got ANY leisure time, they don`t maintain friendshipS, they prefer A career 'then' THAN A family. Finally they are alone.... Despite that they are exhausted and overworkED, they can't slow down...
Secondly workaholizm is a problem in rich countrIES (l. mnoga) such as : Canada
USA, France, GB, GermanY. In 'this' THESE (l. mn) countrIES employeeS have to do things quickly and efficientLY.
..their health 'is in bad condition' (mozna tez suffers). They CAN suffer a heart attack.
On the other hand, Life in poor countrIES such as Brazil, Argentina and
African countries is slow - everyONE haS time, they don't live under
stress. They are as poor as A church mouse, but they are 'glad' (moza lepiej happy). They have large AMOUNT OF time on THEIR handS. They can queue FOR 2 days and they don't get irritated
To sum up, thESE words “Time is money", LARGELY depend on THE type of 'person
character' (character a person has) and THEIR place in the world.

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