Proszę Was bardzo o sprawdzenie i poprawę.

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Witam i zaraz na początku proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie mojej pracy.

Mam na zadanie napisać list z wakacji i zawrzeć w nim:
-czym podróżowałam,
-jak minęła moja podróż,
-opisać hotel w którym się zatrzymałam,
-wypisać miejsca jakie zamierzam zwiedzić i jak będę spędzać wolny czas,
-poinformować przyjaciela jakie upominki kupiłam,
-napisać kiedy wracam do domu.

Napisałam tak:

Hi Jack,
how are you? I hope you are fine.
I' so happy to be here in Southampton, for my holidays.
I was traveling by plane. The journey was short but unfortunetly during the jurney was a storm. I was scared.
Now I stay in a big hotel "The Atlantic" in the center of city.
This place is very clean. I get a nic room with big and beautiful bathroom.
Here is restaurant with delicious dishes. Close to the hotel is a beach. I will go there in amy free time.
I'm going to visit City Art Gallery, The Mayflower - the largest theathre in southern England, a huge park, Manitime Museum - a building what was built in the 14th century, Southampton Football Club and of course Old Town.
I promise to buy some gift to my family.
............................................................ (tu jeszcze nic nie wymysliłam).
I'm sure I will enjoyed my holidays. Unfortunetly I will stay here only two weeks.
I will call you when I will come back home.

Jeszcze raz bardzo proszę o poprawę błedów.
How are you?
I 'was traveling' TRAVELLED by plane. The journey was short, but 'unfortunetly' (ortog) during the 'jurney' (ortog) THERE was a storm.
Now I AM stayING in a big hotel "The Atlantic" in the centRE of THE city.
I 'get' HAVE a 'nic' (ortog) room with big and beautiful bathroom.
Here THERE is restaurant with delicious dishes.
I will go there in 'amy' (Ortog) free time.
I'm going to visit THE City Art Gallery, The Mayflower - the largest
'theathre' (ortog) in southern England, a huge park, THE MaRitime Museum - a
building 'what' WHICH was built in the 14th century, Southampton Football Club
and of course THE Old Town.
I promise to buy some gift (tylko jeden? - tutaj potrzeba l. mn) 'to' FOR my family.
>(tu jeszcze nic nie wymysliłam).
I'm sure I will enjOY my holidays. 'Unfortunetly' (ortog) I will stay here
FOR only two weeks.
I will call you when I 'will come' GET back home.
Bardzo Ci dziękuję, to dla mnie wiele znaczy.
Jesteś dla mnie bardzo pomocny.
Pozdrawiam

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