List z wakacji do nauczycielki - pomoc

Dear Mrs. Anna

Well, as you see I finally got to Rome. I've been here since two weeks.
I got there by car - journey was painful ! Too hot for journey by car without air-conditioning.
I'm staying in nice apartment near to see. I have everthing here, two bedrooms, bathroom and kitchen also TV sat and internet. The beach is very close so I can go there with my familly every day.
Rome is the most beautiful city that i have ever been. I have already seen a lot of interesting places and there is more ahead of me ! I was very impressed by the stunning view of Coloseum.
The weather is hot and sunny.I still can't believe that the weather is so great in here. The Sun shines all the time.
I wish You were here, also I miss school very much.


Yours Faithfully

XY


czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić błędy ? Bardzo proszę również o dodanie jakiś szczegółów na temat tego z kim przyjechałem itp ( nie wiem jak to ująć) nie wiem czy wystarczająco dużo napisałem o podrózy.

Pozdrawiam i proszę o pomoc !

Podbijam, bardzo ważne dla mnie proszę o pomoc ! :)

Dear Mrs. Anna - (Jak zaczynamy Dear Mrs - to konczymy Yours sincerely)

Well, as you CAN see I finally got to Rome. I've been here 'since' FOR two
weeks.
I got 'there' (nie there a HERE-bo juz jestes na miejscu) by car. THE journey was painful! Too hot for A journey by car without air-conditioning.
I'm staying in nice apartment near to THE 'see' (see - to widziec, patrzyc - tutaj mowa o SEA). I have everYthing here, two bedrooms, bathroom and A kitchen also A sat TV and THE internet. The beach is very close, so I can go there with my 'familly' (family) every day.
Rome is the most beautiful city that 'i' (I - piszemy wielka litera) have ever been TO.
I was very impressed by the stunning view of THE Coloseum.
I wish 'You' (you w srodku zdania piszemy mala litera) 'were' WAS here, also I miss school very much.
Yours 'Faithfully' (sincerely)