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"where are you?"

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Where are you?
It was a normall , sunny day. I sat in classroom and heard while a teacher said about something boring. I was very tired. I closed my eyes and I was in other place.
The sun was shining and the birds was singing. I was lieing at green gross. Everything had seemed normal at first. I had been there for half an hour , before a someone shouted, Suddenly many people closed in me and I didn't can to escape. They had been tieing my hands and feet and my motions was limited. I was very scared, because the newcomers looked terrifying. They were black and had red faces, wore only short skirts and had bones in their nose, it looked like earrings. Now, I would just run away, but that time I was too frightened to just leave the body. I thought: " Where are we going?" - it was all. The men was speaking something to me, they made a strange face. I didn't understand anythings. We had been going for a very long time before I saw this place. It was a small village. In the middle was a huge fire. Over its hung a big boiler. All was clear. I was shattered. I was starting shout: "Aaaaa!!!". Suddenly I felt, that somebody was shaking me. I listened: "Where are you?!"
I opened my eyes and I saw my teacher. She stands near me. I was in classroom and around me were only my friends. I must felt asleep. It was happening, when I was at firs class.
My friends have been referring my Śpioch for I told them about my dream. I have only fell asleep once, but I will remember it for years.

It was a normall{pis. NORMAL}, sunny day. I sat in {THE/ A} classroom and heard {LISTENED/ WAS LISTENING} while a teacher said {WAS TALKING} about something boring. I was very tired. I closed my eyes and I was in other {ANOTHER} place.
The sun was shining and the birds was {WERE!} singing. I was lieing {pis. LYING}at {ON} green gross{pis. GRASS}. Everything had seemed normal at first. I had been there for half an hour, before{lepiej: WHEN} {bez:a} someone shouted{.} Suddenly many people closed in {IN ON ME?}me and I didn't can to {COULDN'T} escape. They had been tieing{HAD TIED} my hands and feet and my motions{MOVEMENTS} was {WERE} limited. I was very scared, because the newcomers looked terrifying. They were black and had red faces, wore only short skirts and had bones in their noseS, it{WHICH} looked like earrings. Now, I would just run away, but {AT}that time I was too frightened to just leave the body{WHAT BODY??}. I thought: " Where are we going?" - it was all. The men was speaking{WERE SAYING} something to me, they made a strange face. I didn't {COULDN'T}understand anythings{ANYTHING}. We had been going for a very long time before I saw this place. It was a small village. In the middle {THERE} was a huge fire. Over its {IT} hung a big boiler {COOKING POT??}. All was clear. I was shattered. I was starting {TO}shout: "Aaaaa!!!". Suddenly I felt{bez przecinka} that somebody was shaking me. I listened{HEARD}: "Where are you?!"
I opened my eyes and I saw my teacher. She stands {WAS STANDING}near me. I was in {THE} classroom and around me were only my friends. I must felt {MUST HAVE FALLEN} asleep. It was happening{bez przecinka} when I was at {MY}firsT class {OF THE DAY?}.
My friends have been referring my {TO ME AS} Śpioch {a SLEEPYHEAD}for I told them about my dream. I have only fell {FALLEN}asleep once, but I will remember it for years.