list do znajomej z anglii - proszę o sprawdzenie

praca domowa z ang.
list z użyciem czasów present simple i present continous.
(przeprowadzka do nowego mieszkania)

Hi Susan!
I'm sorry that I'm not writing to you for a long time because I was very busy.
I and my family moved to the new house. We moved the week ago. I live now in soutern Poland in Wroclaw city. Probably you want to know why we moved? My dad and I found a new job in the city which we are satisfied very much. Besides we decided to move to the more developed economically city than this hole in which we lived so far. My house is put on suburbs. There aren't noisy streets and emporiums here. I have a great room into which I can put all my books for the learning of English. Out of the window I can see the nearby park where I often go with the dog. In the living room a panoramic TV set and real fireplace are situated. I'm very satisfied with my new house. You must arrive to me and see my new house. I'm inviting you for holidays.
I'm looking forward in hope.
Best wishes.
getit

Najwazniejsze pytanie, zanim ktos sie podejmnie pomocy, to czy aby napewno jest tam ograniczenie mowiace o uzywaniu tylko tych dwoch czasow gramatycznych, Present Simple i Present Continuous? Ciezko jest pisac o czymkolwiek przy takiej restrykcji.
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chodzi o to żeby głównie używać present simple i present continous ale można też stosować inne( nie jest to zabronione)

>Hi Susan!
>I'm sorry that I {haven't written} to you for a long time. {It's} because I was
>very busy.
>{My} family {and I have} moved to {a} new house. We moved {there a} week ago. {Now} I live
>{} in {southern} Poland in {the city of} Wroclaw. {You may} want to know why
>we moved? My dad {} found a new job in the city which {he is}
>{satisfied with} very much. Besides, we decided to move to {a} more {economically developed} city than {that} hole in which we {had} lived {before}. My house is
>{set in the} suburbs. There aren't noisy streets and emporiums here. I have
>a {lot of} room {where} I can put all my books for {} learning {}
>English. Out of the window I can see {a} nearby park where I often go
>with the dog. In the living room a panoramic TV set and real fireplace
>are situated. I'm very satisfied with my new house. You must {come} and see my new house {one day}. I'm inviting you {to spend your} holidays {at our place}.
>I'm looking forward {to your arrival, I hope}.
>Best wishes.
>getit

dzięki wielkie :D