A co sie stalo z moimi ukochanymi 'a' i 'the' - czy ich nie lubisz uzywac? One tez sa potrzebne w zdaniu i az prosza sie zeby ich uzywac.
Gdzie napisalam (ortog) to znaczy ze jest blad ortog (spelling)- prosze popraw
Today 'showbisnes' (ortog) is A very profitable 'buisness' (ortog). Many people would like to 'take' (dlaczego uzywasz 'take'?) participate in this 'show'. Among them are THE very young and inexperienced players. 'Mayby' (ortog) IT is too early or 'mayby' (ortog) 'that' (niepotr) THERE are new rules in this world?
Beeing a star can be A very interesting experience. At first, children and teenagers can ''quicly' (ortog) learn than older people' (cos mi tutaj nie gra) how to live in this world 'becouse' (juz nic tutaj nie powiem - ale wiedz jedno, to slowo tak sie nie pisze) they can very 'easyli' (ortog) 'domesticate' (NIE - to slowo uzywa sie do zwierzat - to domesticate a cat or a dog - ale nigdy ludzi). Secondly if 'that' (nie- cos innego) young people are very good in their profession they are very 'fame' (nie- tutaj FAMOUS-chyba slyszales o tym slowie) which is A very exciting 'feel'(chyba FEELING) even 'thought age' (nie - tego nie masz na mysli - o czym myslisz to..even at that young age).
Finaly, when you are 'fame' (nie - FAMOUS) you can be rich and this is the main 'target to take' (nie - albo ..aim, albo target to reach). Only A few
'artist' (artist to l. poj - a tutaj 'a few- to znaczy l. mn) do it for THE public and 'oneself' (nie - tutaj ...for themselves).
On the other hand, too 'quicly' (ortog) A 'carrer' (ortog) can be very dangerous. For example, you don't have much time, so you must 'lost' (popraw- nie to slowo) something of YOUR childhood and 'youth' (tutaj uzyj adolescence). In spite of the fact that you must participate in A different performance, you MAY neglect school and learning. You have many 'journey' (journey to l. poj - a many to daje znac o l. mn-prosze popraw) as a result you don't have time 'to' FOR your friends. You 'lost' (zle slowo - tutaj 'lose') too many things to 'go' (chyba nie - chyba DO) that indifferently.
In 'cocnlusion' (ortog), though A 'carrer'(ortog) in adolescence is very interesting and tempting IT can be very perilous too. You can win more for your
colleagues but you can loose too much- )To zdanie jest b. dziwne).
Everything 'is' (po co is?) depends 'for' ON you.