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My plans for the future

I am going to grammar school now. I am young, because I am only 15 years old, but I must decide about my life now. The choice of school is difficult, because I don t know what I want to do. I think about architect, because I like Maths and geometry, but my father tries to persude me for lawyer. He repeats me that, is very good job, man can good earn and man can find the job everywhere: not onle in office, but in factory, too. This profession is very useful in life, when man knows a law, everything is easier: nobody can t me “jump”. My father knows about it very good, because we have got horrible neighbours, they cavil everything, they are better than detectives...but I must write about different matter. I agree with my dad, but is a certain problem: I hate History and Polish! I learnt it only when I must. I can t stand learning dates. It s horrible! I have got good memory, but short. I am not very keen on writting compositions. I am good schoolgirl, always have a certificate with red belt, but History and Polish is for me a ”black magic”. I try convince my father, but he tells, that I will cope. I don t know whether I will agree, I must cogitate. But I know certainly that I wouldn t be a spinster. I would have a family: a lovely husband and two children: elder boy and girl. I am going to live in Pcim, because I don t like a big city. I am not going to go abroad, because in Poland is excellently! (I was in Roma one week ago and I had rather! ) But first I am going to do career, I am not going to be a “house hen”. My dream is voyage around world! When I will have all, I will become even a grandmother...
Basiu-
Ten sam tekst czytam juz 3ci raz - a do tego, ja to juz tracilam czas na tym i to poprawilam, ale jak widze, to ty nie umiesz (albo i nie chcesz) poszukac tego.
Czy naprawde myslisz, ze my nie mamy innych zajec, jak poprawiac ten sam tekst wylacznie dla ciebie az 3 razy. Wiem, wiem, wiem, nikt inni ciebie nie obchodzi - ale tutaj sa inni ludzie ktorzy tez potrzebuja pomocy. Prosze tego nie robic.
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