when I was going home at 'ten pm o'clock' (niema czegos takiego. Dzien sie dzieli na 'am' i 'pm'. Jak chcesz to uzyj '10 p.m.' O'clock uzywamy jak mowimy od 1 to 12tej. Jak chcemy uzyc o'clock to wtedy.. going home at 10 o'clock in the evening...) from a party WHEN I saw a man. He was middle-ageD, he had a 'mustache' (ortog) and A beard.
He 'was wore' (dlaczego uzyles 'was' - to co napisales to On byl mial na sobie...) a sporting, worn-out clothes
He looks like a 'lifter' (nie wiem co masz na mysli - czy shoplifter?)
He said TO me: "give me your phone" I was seriously 'a bit' (to niepotr) frightened. I ran away and called 'to' (niepotr) THE police.