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It was saunny day on September. It was the most boring holiday than I have ever have, but two days later my friend Lucy come to me.
She said: " I have wonderfuul idea to do ouir holiday amazing! My uncle's a house in Bieszczady, but it's empty now, so we can stay there for a week".
I was very happy and decided to go there with my friend Lucy ank Kate. We'r seventeen. Kate and I
had dark hair and wore black trousers and green T-shir. Lucy, who had blond hair wore jens and red blouse. The sun was shining when we come there. In the first three days we were walkin, watching TV, telling stiupid stories, playing volleyball and of coufse laughing. Some day we decided to visit house's attic.
Lucy said: "Maybe we'll find something interesting there! Let's see".
"I'm a bit of sceared" : I said. Attic has only one small window so there was dark,but it wasn't a problem, because we had a torch. We're looking for something interesting when we heard a goran. Suddenly Kate shout: " Ghost"
We saw a strange white personage who was bringing closer to us. We're frightened and screaming. We quickly ran away and come back to our city.
It was the most terrible adventure in our life and we have never gone there again.

It was 'saunny' (o jakiej saunie tu piszesz, prosze nie pisac ang slow w sposob w ktory je wymawiamy) day 'on' (NA?) September. It was the most boring holiday thaT I have ever have, but two days later my friend Lucy come to JOIN me.
She said: " I have 'A' wonderfuul idea to 'do' (nie do a MAKE) 'ouir' (ortog) holiday amazing! My uncle's 'a' (bez 'a', albo my uncle has a) house in Bieszczady...
I was very happy and decided to go there with my friend Lucy 'ank' AND Kate.
'We'r' (ortog) seventeen. Kate and I 'had' (aha, to znaczy ze teraz jestescie blondynki - zly czas) dark hair and wore black trousers and green 'T-shir' (co to - nie lubisz dokanczac slow- ortog). Lucy, who had blond hair wore 'jens' (ortog) and A red blouse. The sun was shining when we 'cAme' (zle zlowo - arrived) there. In the first three days we were 'walkin' (ej? a co sie stalo z 'g'?), watching TV, telling 'stiupid' (ortog) stories, playing volleyball and of 'coufse' (ortog) laughing. 'Some' ONE day we decided to visit THE house's attic.
"I'm a bit 'of' (niepotr) 'sceared' (ortog)" : I said. Attic has only one small window so 'there' IT was dark,but it wasn't a problem, because we had a torch. 'We're' WE WERE looking for something interesting when we heard a 'goran' (ortog). Suddenly Kate shoutED (czas przeszly): "Ghost"
>We saw a strange white personage who was 'bringing' (a co on przynosil - chyba COMING) closer to us. 'We're' WE WERE frightened and screaming. We quickly ran away and cAme back to our city.
It was the most terrible adventure 'in' OF our life..(jabym tutaj uzyla LIVES -dlatego, ze bylo wiecej jak jedna osoba)