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It was in my brithday , a sunny day in July. I was spending this time at my grandmothers home in the village. My grandmothers house is situated close to the fantastic and clean lake .
It was so hot so I decide go to the lake and swim. I went to the lake and when I was swiming dark clouds appeared on the sky , I was in shock because it was a fast change , Suddenly it started to rain heavely and the lake was rough. I began to drown and I was screaming for help.
A man who was walking near the lake fortunately heard my scream and he ran to help me. When he saved me I invited him to house of my grandmothers . My grandmother made a tea and I thanked the man for help.

>It was my brithday - a sunny day in July. I was spending time (ALBO HOLIDAYS)
>AT my grandmother'S house in A village. My grandmother'S house is
>situated close to (albo near) a beautiful and clean lake .
>It was VERY hot so I decideD TO swim IN THE LAKE. I went THERE
>and when I was swimMing, dark clouds appeared IN the sky. I was in
>shock because it was a fast change. Suddenly it started to rain
>heavILY and the lake BECAME rough. I began to drown and I was screaming
>for help.
>FORTUNATELY,A man who was walking near the lake, heard my scream and he
>ran to help me. AFTER he saved me, I invited him to my
>grandmother'S HOUSE. SHE made tea and I thanked the man for
>help.

Dzieki Klimi :D

>AT my grandmother'S house in A village

jakbym mial cos zasugerowac to to:

at my grandmother's (house) in the country.

moim zdaniem 'in a village' oznacz takie jakies nieokreslone pojecie, ze niby mieszka we wiosce, ale zapewne na wsi

Dokładnie to samo pomyślałam, ale nie chciałam dużo mieszać:)