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Narrow Escape
-24 year- old British student Thomas Brown
-nearly drowned while swimming yesterday
-on holiday- four friends
-go swimming after eating
-got cramp, began to drown
-friends help him reach the beach
-tourist call ambulance- take to hospital
-doctors’ press release- do not swim after eating.
"narrow Escape"
A young 24 British student Thomas Brown and his four friends went on holiday. They arrived in the Hawai, there stayed in the hotel. The next day they in the beach. Thomas was very hungry so, he ate pizza and went swimming after eating. Thomas got cramp and began drown! When his friends saw it immediately help him reach the beach. Tourist called ambulance for Thomas. Ambulance very fast arrived and take to hospital. When Thomas wokeup ask Doctor "What happend?" Doctor said "You herly drowned while swimming yesterday. Do not swim after eating".