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Dear Ada,
Hi! How are you? I hope you are well. Sorry I haven't been in touch for a while but I been busy. Thanks for your last e-mail.
Guess what? I'm going to a Sunrise Festival next month. Would you like go with me? You really must go.
The Sunrice Festival take place in Kołobrzeg and it runs from 25 July to 27. That festival is great club music event. It has the best DJ's of the world present their own music. We go to Kołobrzeg 24 July and staying for the weekend. The total cost will be 100$ including meals, accomodation and tickets.
Please say you'll come. Let me konw as soon as possible so we can settle detail. Hope hear from you soon.
Love,
Asia

Jeśli ktos ma pomysł na coś lepszego w tej pracy bardzo proszę napisać.
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Sorry I haven't kept in touch for a while but I have been busy.
Would you like to go with me?
The Sunrise Festival takes place
It has the best .......................................own music,(to zdanie takie poplatane)ja bym napisala inaczej
There will be albo there are the best DJs in the world who perform their own music
we are going to (wczesniej pisalas to w pres cont wiec po co zmieniasz)
and staying there for the weekend.
the total cost is.....