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TV and radio programs


Young people in my country watch music channels.The most popular is VIVA and MTV.
In this program there is new music and current infotmation about stars.Teenagers
watch many serials.The best serial is ,,M jak Miłość".My favourite radio program is
is ,,Eska".In this radio we can listen to new songs and information about your city.


Hobbies and interests


In Poland everyone has difrent hobbies.You can collect poscart or play tennis.
Young people usually play the computer game and watch tv but most poland
teengesr like spending time in an active way.Most boy like fishing and play
football and most girl like shopping.A lot of teengers like travelling.
Teengers have some places where they can meet, for example
pizzerias restourant or disco.


Music


Teenagers in my country listen to various music.Different teengers listen to
different music so there are rap fans, people liking rock,
fascinated by techno .Girls like young singers and popular boysband.
Boys listen to hip-hop or pop music.The most popular
singer is Dorota Rabczewska I can hear music everywhere on the bus ,
schops and supermarket.It" s terible.I don"t like her music becouse
I think it is very stupid and boring.I think music consolidate people because
every day young people make neew fan club when
the young can meet one another


Books

In my conuntry young people read books to school.Some times people
read Harry Potter or Princesse diaries.Teenagers don"t like read books
because they prefer watch films .Young people says :,,I don"t have time
to read books".Sometimes i like reading book.My Favourity book is
,,Dzieci z doworca zoo" and ,,Północ"


Magazines

In Poland there are magazines for teenagers .Boys like football magazine
and car magazine but girls like a newspaper about fashion , cosmetics and
stras.The most popular magazines are Bravo , Victor , Avanti and
Bravo Sport.Magazines are chip and young can buy it everywhere.
Magazines usually write for teenagers, articles are often exciting
and interesting.


Sports

In poland the most popular sport is football every boy likes it.Teengers like running,
swiming and cycling.In poland there are swiming pools where you can
learn how to swim .In the afternoon you can go to fitness room and
spend times in and spend time in a pleasant way.
They spend a lot of time on learning, using computers and watching tv,
but sometimes they feel worse, they feel tired, than they need sport.
It is a good way to relax


Clubs

The best place to meet new friends is a party
'In this program' (w tym jednym?) there is new music and current infoRmation about stars.
The best serial is ,M jak Miłość".(a po ang?)
In this 'radio' (nie bo Eska to nie radio a program) 'we' can listen to new songs and information about 'your' (nie, albo we can listen about our albo you can listen about your) city.
Hobbies and interests
In Poland everyone has 'difrent' (ortog) hobbies. You can collect 'poscart' (ortog) or play tennis.
Young people usually play 'the' computer gameS (bo napewno maja wiecej jak jedna) and watch tv but most 'poland' (nie- Poland to Polska, a ty chcialas powiedziec polskie-Polish) 'teengesr' (ortog) like spending time in an active way.
Most 'boy' (tylko ten jeden - dlaczego nie uzywasz l. mnogiej BOYS) like fishing and playING football and most girlS like shopping.
A lot of 'teengers' (ortog) like travelling.
'Teengers' (ortog) have some places where they can meet, for example
pizzerias, 'restourant' (ortog)(tylko jedna) or discoS (bo jest ich wiecej jak jedna).
Music
Different 'teengers' (ortog) listen to different music, so there are rap fans, people liking rock, (ale kto?)fascinated by techno. Girls like young singers and popular boysbandS.
I can hear music everywhere on the bus, IN 'schops' (ortog) and IN THE supermarket. It's 'terible'(ortog). I don't like her music 'becouse' (prosze poprawic to slowo - to slowo niestety nie istneje w jez. ang) I think it is very stupid and boring.I think music consolidateS people because
every day young people 'make' (tutaj inne slowo) 'neew' (ortog) fan clubS when
the young can meet one another.
Books
In my 'conuntry' (ortog) young people read books 'to school' (cos nie tak).Some times people read Harry Potter or 'Princesse' (ortog) diaries. Teenagers don't like readING books because they prefer TO watch films .Young people 'says' (nie, says to tylko odnosi sie do 3os.l.poj - tutaj SAY) I don't have THE time
to read books".Sometimes 'i' (prosze pisac to duza litera) like reading A book.My Favourity book is 'Dzieci z doworca zoo' (po ang?) and 'Północ' (po ang)
Magazines
Boys like football magazineS and car magazineS, but girls like 'a' (niepotr) 'newspaper' (newspaper to gazeta nie magazine) about fashion , cosmetics and 'stras' (ortog).
Magazines are 'chip' (nie, chip to frytki- tutaj CHEAP) and young PEOPLE can buy 'it' (ale magazine to l. mnoga- dlaczego 'it'?) everywhere.
Magazines usually write 'for teenagers, articles' (zla kol slow - articles for teenagers) WHICH are often exciting and interesting.
Sports
In 'poland' (prosze duza litera Poland) the most popular sport is football every boy likes it.
In Poland there are 'swiming' (ortog) pools where you can learn how to swim .In the afternoon you can go to A fitness room and spend time in a pleasant way.
They spend a lot of time on learning, using computers and watching tv,
but sometimes they feel worse, they feel tired, thEn they need sport.

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