Proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania

Proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania, z góry dzięki za odp.

It started like any other day. I was walking near the river in order to relax after the a long, school week. I was complaining about the school when I noticed something incredible at the river. It was an endearing golden fish. She head for me and said if I had three wishes, she would deliver it. I thought about my horrible hair. It was always a big muddle and when I was young, other children laughed at me. I thought: if only I had long, black, straight hair. When I got home, I couldn’t believe that at last I have proper hair. The next day at school every person was jealous of my hair and they wondered how my hair got up to order. I thought: if only it wasn’t a dream. This day after school I went for a walk and I came across a golden fish again. She told me that I had only one wish and I should capitalize on it reasonably. I was dismayed, because I said only one wish, but the fish told me, that my second wish was: if only it wasn’t a dream. I walked nervously near the river and pondered what my third wish could be. I thought: I wish I had an idea. One minute later I had an idea: I wish I could still have one hundred wishes. Then the golden fish brought nearer me and said: your third wish was: I wish I had an idea. Thank you! I went home frantically and I knew that I will remember this story to the end of my life.

I was walking near the river in order to relax after the a long, 'school week' (jabym tutaj dala...week at school). I was complaining (ale do kogo? czy sam do siebie?) about the school when I noticed something incredible at the river. It was an endearing 'golden' (moze gold) fish. She headED for me and said 'if' (cos to mi nie pasuje) I had three wishes, she would deliver 'it' (ale three - to oczekuje l. mnoga - popraw).
It was always 'a big muddle' (nie jestem tego pewna) and when I was young, other children laughed at me.
When I got home, I couldn't believe that at last I haD proper hair. The next day at school 'every person' (a dlaczego nie EVERYONE?) was jealous of my hair and they wondered how my hair 'got up to order' (cos tu nie tak).
I thought if only it wasn't a dream. 'This' THAT day after school I went for a walk and I came across 'a' THE (bo juz ja znasz, jestescie na 'ty') golden fish again.
She told me that I had only one wish and I should capitalize on it
'reasonably' (moze nie to slowo). I was dismayed, because I HAD SAID only one wish, but the fish told me that my second wish 'was' HAD BEEN if only it wasn't a dream. I thought I wish I had an idea. One minute later I had an idea I wish I could still have one hundred wishes. Then the golden fish 'brought' CAME nearer me and said 'your third wish was I wish I had an idea'.

"complaining' czyli sam do siebie
"got up to order" to miało być doprowadzone do porządku

>>>to miało być doprowadzone do porządku
...became so neat and tidy.