prosze o sprawdzenie krótkiej pracy (opis domu)

I live in a detached house in Wąchock. My house is big and comfortable. Downstairs there are a living room, a kitchen, a dining room and my parent’s room. Upstairs there are my room, my sister’s room, a corridor and an attic. My room is little, but very cosy. I like it very much, but I spend very little time there. Outside the house there is a garden with lots of flowes. My mother likes very much flowers. I would like to have a little aquatics. I live in village, also we have fresh air. I like my house very much.

>I live in a detached house in Wąchock. My house is big and
>comfortable. Downstairs, there are a living room, a kitchen, a dining
>room and my {parents'} room. Upstairs, there are my room, my sister's
>room, {and} a corridor. {We've got an attic, too.} My room is little, but very cosy. I
>like it very much, but I spend very little time there. Outside the
>house, there is a garden with lots of flowes. My mother likes
>flowers {very much}. I would like to have a little {fountain}. I live in {a} village, {so I think}
>we {get lots of} fresh air. I like my house very much.

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