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Scotland – formerly it was an independent kingdom, but now it is part of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland. It includes part of islands of Great Britain and Hebrides, Orkney Islands, Shetland Islands. In the south it border on England. Scenery in a large part of it is upland and mountain. A climate is moderately warm, markedly sea. In the north of it are Scottish Highlands and Central Highlands, in the south of it is Southern Uplands. In the center of it is small Scottish Lowlands which bring together most of people.
St. Andrew is a patron of Scotland. In 2005 forty two percent of population of Scotland belong to calvinist Church of Scotland, which is a national church from 1560.
An interesting piece of news is flower which is characteristic for Scotland as a region which belong to Great Britain is thistle. Bagpipes, kilt (it is national dress in Scotland) and whisky are the most famous products of Scottish culture. Formerly kilt was only men's dress, but now all of Scot can wear kilt. Scotland is famous for the Loch Ness Monster. In Scotland are lots of castles.

It includes partS of islands of Great Britain and Hebrides, Orkney
Islands AND Shetland Islands. In the south it borderS 'on' WITH England. Scenery
in a large part of 'it' (chociaz tutaj jabym napisala Scotland) is upland and mountainOUS. 'A' THE climate is moderately warm, 'markedly sea' (cos tego nie rozumiem - napisz to po polsku).
In the north of it are Scottish Highlands and Central Highlands, in the south of it 'is' ARE (dlatego, ze uplands-l.mn) Southern Uplands. In the
'center' (center czy centRE?) of it 'is' ARE small Scottish Lowlands which bring together most of THE eople.
St. Andrew is 'a' THE patron of Scotland. In 2005 forty two percent of
population of Scotland belongED to THE Calvinist Church of Scotland, which
'is' WAS (czas przeszly) 'a' THE national church from 1560.
An interesting piece of news is THE flower which is characteristic for
Scotland as a region 'which belong to Great Britain' (to jest niepotr-tylko mydli) is THE thistle.
Bagpipes, kilt (it is THE national dress in Scotland) and whisky are the
most famous products of Scottish culture. Formerly THE kilt was only THE men's
dress, but now all 'of' (niepotr) ScotS can wear THE kilt. Scotland is famous for the Loch Ness Monster (znana popularnie jako 'Nessie'). In Scotland THERE are lots of castles.

Dzięki wielkie :)

markedly sea - wyraźnie morski