Proszę o sprawdzenie streszczenia "tinkers Island"

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Prosiłbym o sprawdzenie tego streszczenia jakby ktoś mógł to na dziś, bo potrzbne jest mi ono na wczoraj :D. Z góry dzięki.

Summary of Stephen Rabley's "Tinkers Island"

Action is starting in November 1798, at London. Jenny and Sam Tinkers are working in market. One day Sam gets mistaken for a thief and he's arrested. He gets with other prisoners on the ship sailing t Australia.Jenny has no family except Sam, so she's going to get a job on a Black Star. Girl works very hard for six weeeks as a cook assistant. One night she goes to captain's room and she finds keys which are usually near to the bed, on the table. Jenny goes to the bottom of ship and frees her father. They get on a small boat and escape from Black Star. After three days they're very hungry and thirsty, two days after that Jenny sees a bird, and says to Sam that there can be an island. Sam stands up and sees an island. When they get to it, they find a river with cold, clear water and coconuts to eat. In four days they finish making house with grass and wood. They're very happy for first year, but tragedy happens. When Sam is looking for coconuts he doesn't see snake on the ground and it bites him. Later Jenny finds him on the ground, he sleeps for three days. After ten days he gets back to health. One morning Jenny sees a ship, when Sam see it they run for it and hide. Few minutes later three men find them. Sailors propose them to go to America on their ship Red Rose. They agree and next day they're sailing to America.
Action 'is starting' STARTS in November 1798, 'at' IN London. Jenny and Sam Tinkers 'are working' WORK 'in' ON A market.
He gets IN with other prisoners on 'the' A ship sailing to Australia. Jenny has no family except Sam, so she's going to get a job on 'a' THE Black Star. 'Girl' (jaka girl - nieznana czy Jenny, wtedy THE) girl works very hard for six 'weeeks' WEEKS as a cookS assistant. One night she goes to THE captain's room and she finds keys which are usually near to the bed, on the table. Jenny goes to the bottom of ship and frees her 'father' (ale tutaj dopiero pierwszy raz mowisz, ze to 'father', myslalam, ze 'brother'). They get on a small boat and escape from THE Black Star. After three days they're very hungry and
thirsty, two days 'after that' LATER Jenny sees a bird, and says to Sam that
there 'can' MUST be an island (nearby).
(ale niewiedzialam ze zaczynali to robic-) In four days they finish making A house with grass and wood.
They're very happy for THE first year, but tragedy happens. When Sam is
looking for coconuts he doesn't see 'A' snake on the ground and it bites
him. Later Jenny finds him on the ground, (but, and?) he sleeps for three days.
After ten days he gets back to (normal?) health. One morning Jenny sees a ship,
when Sam seeS it they MAKE A run for it and hide.
THE sailors propose TO them to go to America on their ship - THE Red Rose.
Nie wiem jak Ci dziękować, więc po prostu dziękuję. :D

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