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In this times in Poland is too little wars of the past decade but we must be prepared to fight, because polish people should feel safe in our country. I think Poland should abandon compulsory militart service and replace it with a professional army.
Firstly people want have family and when they get invocation to army they lose chance to live and don't devenlope in normal environment and I think people should do what they really want.
Secondly if Poland create a professional army, people who really want go to this they can participate in professional army and fight, because is really big responsibility thing and soldiers must be very strong and really prepared to combat.
Against this, such this army is really high cost for maintenance soldiers, qualifications theirs and for buy a modern weapons.
In the end I think the professional army is really good value because people must feel very safe and no people don't be enforce to fight.

Co to? Juz zapominany o uzyciu 'the' - czy tego nie za bardzo lubic uzywac?

'In this times' (Currently,) in Poland THERE 'is' (is odnosi sie do l. poj - ale 'wars' to l. mnoga - prosze poprawic) too 'little' FEW wars (tu cos brakuje) of the past decade, but we must be prepared to fight, because Polish people should feel safe in 'our' THEIR country.
I think Poland should abandon compulsory 'militart' (ortog) service and replace it with a professional army.
Firstly, 'people' (to znaczy kto? dokladnie) want To have A family and when they get AN 'invocation' (nie jestem pewna czy to jest najlepsze slowo-moze 'conscripted'...sprawdz dokladnie co slowo 'invocation' znaczy) to THE army
they lose THE chance to live and THEY don't 'devenlope' (ortog) in A normal environment and I think people should do what they really want.
Secondly if Poland createS (it - 3os.l.poj) a professional army, people who really want TO go to this 'they' (niepotr) can participate in A professional army and fight, because IT is really A big responsibility 'thing' (jaki thing? o co tu chodzi-niepotr) and soldiers must be very strong and really prepared 'to' FOR combat.
.....Against this, such this army is really high cost for maintenance
soldiers, qualifications theirs and for buy a modern weapons....(tego zdania to nie rozumiem - napisz to po polsku)
In the end I think THAT the professional army is really good value because
people must feel very safe and 'no people' (nie - people wystarczy) 'don't' SHOULD NOT be 'enforceD' (lepiej FORCED) to fight.

Czesc . Mozecie mi to sprawdzic? Jutro daje to do sprawdzenia

Dear Kate and Seba,

I'm so glad about your last letter which you wrote to me. It was a nice surprise to hear from you.
Sorry for not writing earlier, but I 've been having many exams since I got back.
I'm writing to thank you for letting me stay with you in July. I had a wonderful time. The weather was beautiful.
Thanks for great week in this beautiful country which is UK. It was really nice to see you after such a long time. You look great and your oarents are very nice.
I like them and hope they like me too !
It was nice to meet your parents . I'll never forget your mother's cooking. It was delicious. Esspecially I enjoyed "pizza peperoni" and I dream about trying it again. I must get the recipe for this dishs.
For the last two months I've been very busy at my work. My boos wants to give me raise so I must work hard.
That's all for now I must got back to my work. Next holiday I'll invite you to Poland . When you 'll come we'll go to the 3D cinema.
It's fantastic ! I'm planning a meeting with my friends- you must know them.

Love, XYZ
P.S I enclosed a photos!

.Against this, such this army is really high cost for maintenance
>soldiers, qualifications theirs and for buy a modern weapons...

Poza tym taka armia jest bardzo kosztowna w utzrymaniu żołnierzy, podniesieniu ich kwalifiacji oraz na zakup nowoczesnej broni.

>>>>'Against this' (tutaj ADDITIONALLY,, such 'this' (niepotr) army is really VERY EXPENSIVE 'high cost' (niepotr) WHEN IT COMES TO THE 'for' (niepotr) maintenance OF soldiers, 'qualifications theirs' THE RAISING OF THEIR QUALIFICATIONS and for 'buy' THE PURCHASE OF 'a' (niepotr) modern weapons...