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Dear Jack
How are you? I hope you are well. I have the news for you. I would like to say you that a Peter has a new girlfriend who is named Sara. He met Sara in club in Warsaw when he was there with as. He danced with Sara during all night. I would like to talk you about Sara's appearance. By the look of her body I can write you that she is in her early twenties. She is slim and attractive. She has long, curly, fair hair with long fringe. She is very quiet, because when we were talking she didn't say any word for as. In my opinion Sara is the best girlfriend he has ever had. What do you think about this pair. I’m waiting for fast reply.


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I have 'the' (niepotr) (mozna 'some') news for you. I would
like to 'say' TELL you that 'a' (niepotr-tutaj mowisz o osobie ktora znacie - nie tylko o jakims tam Peter) Peter has a new girlfriend 'who is' (niepotr) named Sara.
He met Sara in 'A' club in Warsaw when he was there with 'as' US. He danced
with Sara 'during' (niepotr) all night. I would like to 'talk' TELL you about Sara's appearance. By the look of her body I can 'write you' TELL that she is in her early twenties.
She has long, curly, fair hair with 'A' long fringe. She is very quiet, because when we were talking she didn't say 'any word' ANYTHING 'for' TO 'as' (to slowo jest US).
I'm waiting for 'A' fast reply.