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In my opinion member of Polish parliament Janusz Palikot is a good example of an eccentric. When Palikot became a MOP in 2005, he immediately started to show his original personality, not appreciating the norms of a MOP’s behaviour. As an eccentric, Palikot didn’t hesitate to make real his own ideas (although they were very controversial) in order to call society’s attention to important problems – e.g. he wore T-shirt with the inscription “I am a gay” because he wanted to express himself against discrimination of gays in Poland.
Palikot often shows that he’s independent and nobody (even the authorities of his party) affects his behavior – in July 2007 he called on TV president Kaczyński “oaf”, although his principals from PO forbid him to express his controversial opinions in public. Palikot disregards also different norms – e.g. in fashion. On one of his press conferences he wore… a pink suit. In my opinion all these Palikot’s activities attest that he doesn’t try to be odd – he simply is odd and eccentric.
In my opinion A member of Polish parliament Janusz Palikot is a good
example of an eccentric.
...e.g. he wore A T-shirt with the inscription “I am 'a' (niepotr) gay" because he wanted to express himself against discrimination of gays in Poland.
...in July 2007 he called 'on TV president Kaczyński' (zla kol slow - niegram...) “oaf", although his principals from PO forbid him to express his controversial opinions in public.
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