pets

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Most of people don't realize how important are pets in our life. They are a part of our life and they are our best friends. Pets give us disinterested love and they can bring a lot of tender, which makes house a home. Regardless of species, breed, size or age, pets reward their owners giving them affection,devotion, unconditional acceptance and the purest type of love that we can imagine. It is no doubt that we build such a strong relationship with them.
Humans and animals can form bonds that develops when a person has strong feelings of psychological attachment to an animal. Although the reason of keeping pets is their company. Many researches has been done to show this interaction with animals and people, which can provide us health benefits. Such as: reducing blood pressure and cholesterol, decreasing anxiety and it brings about well-being.
Animals provide good therapy for people dealing with physical or emotional problems. In fact, psychologists and physicians reported that they prescribe being with pets for their patients to help with loneliness, deppresion and other emotional problems including inactivity and stres. I believe that animals can reach out to individuals needs and can get attached to us in the way that no human being can. Animals provide love to those who need it the most. It is really amazing how advanced can be the level of understanding between a person and animal without saying even a single word. Also research showing that the probability of suffering an allergy by children who were growing up with animals is definitely lower.
Anyone who owns a pet have to vaccinated that animal for rabies and be able to provide proof of vaccination.
Animals which are kept outside should have provided by the owner:
- shelter to protect the dog from the wind, snow, rain and overflow of sunlight,
- a clain that is used to tie a dog must be at least 3 meters long.
- Daily fresh food and water.
Animal which we want to take abroad must have a proof of all vaccinations, passport and be in a cage.
People who abuse animal will get punished either by paying a ticket or going to jail up to few years.
I think that someone who wants to have an animal must be very responsiable and mature.
1. Most people...important pets are.../indirect/
2. Although.../ brak 2 części zdania - zaczynasz od "chociaż..."/
3. A lot of research.../uncountable/
4. ...interactions between animals ...(interaction of animals and people on each other)
5. ...provide us with health...
6. ...benefits such as... /bez kropki/
7. Animals provide (supply) people facing physical or emotional problems with a good therapy.
8. ...they prescribed...
9. ...can meet our individual needs
10. Animals give love to...need it most (bez the)
11. ...and an animal...
12. The research also shows...suffering from an allergy...
13. ...who owns a pet must have it vaccinated against rabies and should be able to show the certificate whenever it is needed
14. ...should be provided by the owner with:
15. A shelter...At least a 3 meter chain used to keep the dog on...Daily supply of...
16. The animal which...certificates... be punished (może should be ?)

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