Pomoc w sprawdzeniu

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My brother, who is a student said: " I go to my university by bus and I hate it. I will buy a car if I saved some money." Why do some people like taking a bus and some people dislike? I would prove that going by bus has advantages and disadvatages.
First of all, taking a bus is good, when you have to move in a big city. You do not have to care about hold-up and place to parking. You can relax and listen music in a bus. If you are a student or a pupil you will can revision before an exam.
Actually, going by bus is more ecological than going by car. The more cars, the more pullowed city. Additionally, going by bus usually pays off because bus tickets are more cheap than taxi or gasoline to car.
Nevertheless, the going by bus sometimes is unpleasant. Especially, when bus is crowded and you can not move any part of your body. It is possible that somebody will sit close by you and he will acost you. Somebody will can steal your bag also.
Buses ofen are late. Many people will can are late and they sometimes take the consequences of this.
In summary, taking a bus has supporters and opponents. This is less comfortable than going by car, but without buses we will have to going by foot. I think buses are necessary.

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