The house of my dream - opis

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Prosze o sprawdzenie opisu "domu moich marzeń" ^^ miał zajmować do 200 słów.
btw - powinno być "the house of my dream/dreams" ? mnoga czy poj.? ; p
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The house of my dream

My dream house would be located in the Japan, in the suburbs of Tokyo. The Japan is an insane country and in my humble opinion that craziness is truly appealing. The house would be in a peaceful area just a stone's throw from the sea.
The extrerior of the house would be surely out of the ordinary. It would be very modern villa made of brick and painted white. There would be enormous, elipse-shaped windows in each wall and tiled, steep roof. The house would be surrounded by a quite large garden, where would be a lot of oaks, chestnuts and cherry trees.
Inside, the house would be really spacious, although there would not be many rooms. There would be a cosy living room with a fireplace, an usefully furnished kitchen, large bathroom and a small, but comfortable bedroom. Of course there would be a huge room where I would throw a party. I have a mixed feelings about dark colours, so every room would be painted vivid colours. Also, there would be room in the attic, where I would finally rest after hard work.
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Z gory dzieki
The house of my dreamS (l.mn)
My dream house would be located in 'the' (niepotr) Japan, in the suburbs of
Tokyo. 'The' (niepotr) Japan is an insane country and in my humble opinion that
craziness is truly appealing (dla kogo?).
The extrerior of the house would 'be surely' (zla kol slow- jak juz musisz uzyc to 'surely' to ...surely be) out of the ordinary. It would be 'A' very modern villa made of brick and painted white. There would be enormous, 'elipse' (ortog)-shaped windows in each wall and 'A' tiled, steep roof. The house would be surrounded by a quite large garden, where THERE would be a lot of oaks, chestnuts and cherry trees.
There would be a cosy living room with a fireplace, 'an' A usefully furnished kitchen, large bathroom and a small, but comfortable bedroom.
I have 'a' (niepotr) mixed feelings about dark colours, so every room would be painted IN vivid colours. Also, there would be room in the attic, where I would finally rest after 'hard work' (moze lepiej...a hard day's work).
Dziekuje bardzo za sprawdzenie.
Jeszcze jedno pytanie - czy przed frazą "large bathroom" powinno stać 'a' ?
sorry, tak, nie zauwazylam.
I ewentualnie czy może być (na samym końcu):
"I would finally rest after hard day at work."
>I would finally rest after 'A' hard day at work."
Terri, brakowało Cię tu. Nikt nie ma tyle cierpliwości w poprawianiu wypracowań co Ty.
>>Nikt nie ma tyle cierpliwości w poprawianiu wypracowań co Ty.
Moze, oj moze w miedzyczasie wszyscy sie nauczyli pisac 'because'
'I live in hope'.
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