List formalny do Uczelni

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Polecenie:
Przeczytałeś w anglojęzycznej prasie ogłoszenie o możliwości otrzmania stypendium na uniwersytecie w Edynburgu. Napisz list do komisji rekrutacyjniej tamtejszego uniwersytetu w którym:
-przedstawiasz się i wyjaśnisz cel swojego listu
-podasz skad dowiedziałeś się o stypendium oraz zapytasz o jego wysokość
-napiszesz jaki kierunek cie interesuje i jakie w tej dziedzinie masz osiagniecia
-wyjasnij dlaczego chcesz studiować na tym uniwersytecie (2 argumenty)
-dlugość 120-150

Dear Sir or Madam

My name is XYZ I am student at 4 klas in ZSM Rzeszów.I am writing to ask about stydy at college in Edynburg.
I am read in english magazine about bursary in yours college, so that cold I know how much is thisbursary?
I am want study journalism. I have very good marks in Polish and English and I love write and read article. Sometims I writing for a lokol newspaper.
I wnat study in your school because in future I want to be journalist aln write to a fomous newspaper. Moreover my family live in Edynburg so I live with them.
I look forward to hearing for you.

Yours faithfully.
XYZ


Z góry dziekuje ;)

My name is XYZ AND I am student 'at' IN 4TH 'klas' (to slowo nie jest po ang - lepiej napisz YEAR) in ZSM Rzeszów. I am writing to ask about 'stydy' (ortog- i nie wlasciwe slowo tutaj STUDYING) at A college in 'Edynburg' (ortog).
I 'am' (po pierwsze, czas przeszly- HAVE) read in AN English magazine about A bursary 'in AT 'yours' YOUR college, so that 'cold' (zimno - o jakim zimnie tutaj piszesz?) I know how much is this bursary?
I 'am' (dlaczego uzywasz 'am-czasownik z drugim czasownikiem obok siebie?) want TO study journalism. I have very good marks in Polish and English and I love TO write and read 'article' (tylko o jednym piszesz, czy o wiecej?). 'Sometims' (ortog) I 'writing' WRITE for a 'lokol' (ortog) newspaper.
I 'wnat' (ortog) TO study in your school because in THE future I want to be A journalist 'aln' (ortog) write 'to' IN a 'fomous' (ortog) newspaper. Moreover my family live in 'Edynburg' (ortog) so I COULD live with them.
I look forward to hearing 'for' (for-znaczy dla - dla ciebie?- ma byc FROM-od) you.

My name is Terri and I'm a third-year student of life :)

Loves and KudoZ Terri :)

dziekuje bardzo ;)

oto moj tekst po poprawkach:

My name is XYZ AND I am student IN 4TH YEAR) in ZSM Rzeszów.
I am writing to ask about STUDYING at A college in Edinburgh
I HAVE read in AN English magazine about A bursary AT YOUR college, so that could I know how much is this bursary?
I want TO study journalism. I have very good marks in Polish and English and I love TO write and read articles. sometimes I WRITE for a lokal newspaper.
I want TO study in your school because in THE future I want to be A journalist and write IN a famous newspaper. Moreover my family live in Edinburgh so I COULD live with them.
I look forward to hearing FROM you.


Pozdrawiam

jacku-
to co napisalam w CAPS, to ma byc lower case..CAPS uzywam tylko po to, zeby zwrocic uwage gdzie sa bledy.

My name is XYZ AND I am student in 4th year in ZSM Rzeszów.
I have read in an English magazine about A bursary AT YOUR college, so
(tutaj brakuje COULD YOU LET 'that could I'(niepotr) ME know how much is this bursary?
Sometimes I WRITE for a 'lokal' LOCAL newspaper.
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