Dear Sir or Madam:
I have been visiting your website on a regular basis for quite a long time. It has a lot of interesting articles, news and information from all over the world which I always find very fascinating and stimulating. I especially enjoy reading your stories about various problems facing people in different parts of the world. I also like your news photos and video clips, which are simply excellent.
However, there are a couple of things that I think should be changed. First of all, I find the ads very irritating. They are everywhere and they make it very difficult for me to focus on the content of your website. Although it is possible to eventually close them, it takes time and is very distracting. Secondly, your website publishes too many unconfirmed stories or just celebrity gossip, as well as mediocre photos taken by paparazzi. I do not think that the majority of your readers are really interested in this sort of ‘news’.
Therefore, I would like to make the following suggestions:
--Consider changing the format of your ads so that your readers can still enjoy your website, without being constantly bombarded and interrupted by annoying ads.
--Please feature more photos pertaining to your stories on world events instead of publishing photos of celebrities and pop figures.
--Relegating celebrity articles to a separate section would also be a great idea.
--You videos are the highlight of your website and I would certainly enjoy watching more of them.
I would appreciate if you could seriously consider my suggestions. I am sure that by making some changes to your website, you would attract more regular users.
Should you like to discuss any issues expressed in this letter, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely,
Mark