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In what kind technological development has changed our life.
It’s obvious that technological development has changed our life. Our life becomes easier.
Formerly we must went to bank – now we can make credit transfer by internet.
Recently for shopping we must went to shop – now we can make shopping on internet auctions and order things will supply into our houses. Today thanks for technological development we can communicate with all world. We can use mobile phones, talk by internet even with videochat. Thanks for technological development we have cars and we can use computer. Formerly everything documents was written manually – today all documents is print, a lot of people worked in factory – today in factory works machines and robots. Technological development is present into our houses. We have intelligent kitchens and wash-boards. So technological developments ant news relate with this has changed our life on many way.
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