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Necessity is the mother of invention

Tom was a overworked 40-year-old widower with three children. His wife died two years ago in a fatal car accident. Tom with his family lived in Lubbock in Texas. He worked as an electrical engineer in a local company. He did not manage with housekeeping and raising children.

It all started when some afternoon Tom started crying. He was woeful and tired. He didn’t manage with anything. He needed help ! Suddenly, Tom hit on an idea. If he built a robot he would have more free time. Finally, Tom was a great electrical engineer.
At first Tom had made a plan and later on he went to buy parts to the robot. Next Tom began building the robot. The robot was being built for two months by Tom. In the meantime, Tom neglected the family and the house. His children was going hungry and neglected but they knew that their father made something what them helped. When Tom finished the robot, all was happy. The robot executed all homeworks. Thanks to the robot
Tom had more time for the children and professional work. Tom’s life became easier.

“Necessity is the mother of invention”. That proverb is true. Tom was clever and intelligent men so he did not depress but Tom faced problems and he overcame them.
He built the robot who made his life easier.


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>Tom was aN overworked 40-year-old widower with three children.
He 'did' napisz COULD) not manage with housekeeping and raising children.
It all started when 'some' ONE afternoon Tom started crying.
He 'didn't' COULDN'T manage 'with' (niepotr) anything.
'Finally' (zle slowo, tutaj AFTER ALL), Tom was a great electrical engineer.
His children 'was' (children tutaj l. mn) going hungry and neglected, but they knew that their father 'made' WAS MAKING something 'what them helped' (zla kol slow ...WHICH WOULD HELP THEM). When Tom finished the robot, 'all was' (popraw- all were?) happy. The robot executed all 'homeworks' HOUSEWORK. Thanks to the robot Tom had more time for the children and FOR professional work.

Tom was A clever and intelligent 'men' (tutaj l. poj nie mnoga) so he 'did' WAS not depressED, but Tom faced HIS problems and he overcame them.
He built the robot 'who' WHICH made his life easier.
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