Proszę o sprawdzenie ;) 'Postcard'

Hi Ann,
Greetings from Międzyzdroje! This a great place at the seaside and it is really hot. I’m here with my friends. Everyday we go swimming and sunbathing. Yesterday we went to the disco and guess what happened! I met Cameron Diaz. As you know she is a famous film star and I really like her. We started talking and she turned out very friendly. We were dancing and having fun. W will never forget it! And how are you? Where do you spend your holiday?
Love,
Susan

Hi Ann,
Greetings from Międzyzdroje! This IS a great place at the seaside and it is really hot. I'm here with my friends. Everyday we go swimming and sunbathing. Yesterday we HAD GONE (nie jestem pewien) to the disco and guess what happened! I met Cameron Diaz. As you know, she is a famous film star and I really like her. We started TO TALK and she turned out very friendly. We were dancing and having fun. We will never forget it! And how are you? Where do you spend your holiday?
Love,
Susan

it's really hot here - to jest zdanie o pogodzie
it's really hot - to jest zdanie o, hm, atmosferze w tym miasteczku

every day

yesterday we went

we started talking/to talk - ok

where are you spending your holiday - teraz, a nie zazwyczaj itp.