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Sailing is very popular sport with many people. This is a great spend of time, though sometimes this sport possibly profession. Before taking it up as a hobby, though there are certain pros and cons to be considered.
Firstly sailing give us much pleasant this is great fun for children, young and adults. Next pros is spend of time on a fresh air. we can also improve our activity and visit interesting place where sailing is more pleasant thanks wonderful views and sunsets. Thanks this sport we can spend time with friends. I think it might be nice to sleep on a boat we can also sun bathe.
On the other hand sailing is enough expensive sport, because good yacht is very costly. If we haven't sailing boat we should borrow it so we must bear responsibility if yacht will be spoilt. what is more sailing is sometimes dangerous especially when is thunderstorm. Also sailing boat sails is on a deep lake or sea, so we can fall into the water. Moreover when we are on a sailing boat we must very hard.
All in all sailing is really great but also sometimes too expensive and dangerous sport. However if you likes good fun and strong emotions with adrenaline you should visit big lake or sea start sailing.