A local radio station is running a competition. To enter the
>competition you must submit a detective story. Use 2[tel]words.
>
>Fancy a cigarette? Smoking kills!
>
>“The decease must have occurred between 1-2 a.m(przecinek)" said
>the investigating (investigative albo investigating a crime) police officer when he examined the bloody corpse of
>Rick Evans, the key figure of the tobacco industry. Detective Bradley
>nodded, fixing his glance (dałbym gaze, albo fixing a statuette..with a glance/look/stare) on the gilt (chyba literówka) statuette of AN African pagan god
>lying next to the victim. Why hadn't the murderer taken it to avoid
>the risk of leaving his fingerprints? It was still a mystery to
>Bradley, but he had at least the crime instrument.
>
>Having searched the living room, George Bradley came to the (A)
>standstill (raczej o korkach się tak mówi, lepiej he was at a loss, he was on a sticky wicket, he felt helpless). Not only could he perceive no traces of the burglary, but he also found the house unusually clean as if nothing had happened at all (at all bym pominął). Then, one thing caught his attention. The leather notebook was
>opened on the third page, inscriptions saying: “10.p.m.: Zach Mikes -
>a meeting". The conclusions were obvious. That was it! The influential
>businessman competing with Evans for domination on the market would
>have an evident motive (tu można by dodać coś)
>
>Bradley was very close to the solution (dałbym solving..) but something jarred (dałbym jarred with..) Why had
>Evans invited the murderer to his place? Was he unaware of the danger?
>He entered the kitchen when the truth struck him, all the elements of
>the puzzle matching.
>
>It was the guest's glass that was filled with poisoned drink! And it
>was Zach Mikes who was supposed to be killed. Rick Evans had made only
>one mistake; he paid for (co?) with his (można own) life - he had underestimated his opponent.
It's a well-written and suspense-filled story. Nice!
Keep up the good work. You can write even longer stories :)