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Last summer, I and my sister made shopping. We bought food within one hour. We remrked natural phenomena, witness re fast eruptiond of volcano which was us near.
After short time, I saw an asch, rock and gas, from volcano extracting. Suddenly, great chaos has been made. People were run away, carrying all things far away.
Afterwards on happieness, at is happens, it was a felse alarm. Some people were injured, but I and my sister were OK. We tried to help other people. It was a terrible experience. In next summer, we were to plece, where weren't volcanos.
Last summer, I and my sister 'made' (nie, - albo DID albo WENT) shopping.
We 'remrked' (ortog) A natural phenomena, witness re fast eruptiond of
>volcano 'which was us near' (co to ma byc?).
After A short time, I saw an asch, rock and gas, (tutaj daj czasownik) from THE volcano 'extracting'. Suddenly, A great chaos 'has been' (niepotr) 'made' (nie, nie, tak - occurred). People were runNING away, carrying all things far away.
Afterwards THERE WAS 'on' (zle slowo) 'happieness' (ortog), at is 'happens' (ortog), AS it was a 'felse' (ortog) alarm.
'In' (niepotr) Next summer, we were to 'plece' (ortog), where 'weren't' (napisz to w calosci bo i tak masz zly czas) volcanos.
belkot -
Mimo, że bełkot i tak mi pomogłeś/aś.
Wielkie dzięki! :))
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