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I am on holiday in Australia. J am staying at a guest-house. The weather is hot and sunny. J have been doing a lot of sightseeing. Tomorrow I visited the Archaeological Museum. Yesterda morning I went to football match. In the evening I went to incredible places. The food here is digusting. Here is a lot of beatiful girls.Australia is wonderful island. Here is a lot of places. I lake places. I am having so much fun.

I'm on holiday in Australia. I'm staying at a guest-house. The
weather is hot and sunny. In free time I go sightseeing.
Tomorrow I will visit the Archaeological Museum. Yesterday morning I was on football match. In the evening I went to incredible places. The
food here is digusting. Here are a lot of beautiful girls. Australia is
wonderful island. Here are a lot of interesting places, which I liked. I'm having
so much fun here.

In MY free time I go sightseeing.
Yesterday morning I 'was on' WENT TO football match.
'Here are' THERE ARE a lot of beautiful girls HERE. Australia is A wonderful island. 'Here' THERE are a lot of interesting places, which I liked.

>Yesterday morning I 'was on' WENT TO a football match.
>Australia is A
>wonderful island (like Euroasia?) (place).

'Here' THERE are a lot of interesting places, which
>I liked.
... (no comma)that/which I like.
or
...,(comma) which I like.